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open man hi i'm 25 years old and live in Korea. about 2 years ago, i came to Military service by obligation. now i'm marine and i will have finished that period by 1 month later. after i release from military service, i will go to trip all over the world. i wanna make many friend and if chances, we can meet in my journey, even if not, it's ok. contact me anytime~ i'm inviting you! kk my homepage: www.cyworld.com/77130008

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Hi,
 It would seem, that after national service, the thought of travel is something most young men think about!
 
You say you only have one month left - what will you do then, have you planned a trip already?

  As I write, a Korean friend, who I wrote to while he was in the army, is doing just that at this moment and I had the pleasure of meeting him here in the UK  last week, when he stayed at my home for the weekend before heading off to London, Paris, Venice,Rome and many other places along the way.... 

  I don't come on here as often as I should, I will be in Korea in September so I need to get back into studying Korean again!

- what part of Korea are you from?



 

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Hi
I'm 25 years old and live in Korea.
About 2 years ago, I was in the Military service in Korea.
Now I'm a Marine and I will have finished this period one month from now.
After I'm  released from military service, I will travel all over the world.
I want to make many friends and if possible, we can meet sometime during my journey,
Even if we can't (meet), it's ok.
Contact me anytime~
I'm inviting you! Ha ha.

My homepage:
www.cyworld.com/77130008
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