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Mid-term exams.. Today, it was Columbus day and we had three days off weekend. What I did was...studying, studying...and studying. Why?? it's because I am going to take mid-term exams this Thursday and Friday!!>< Since I am studying at the college in the US, English which is the second language for me makes every material difficult for me to understand and I have to take more time to go over. However, I will not give up! This is the way I chose! I will be a good English speaker in the future and needed for a society. I promised with my important friends that we will have a hot pot party when I go back to Japan for a vacation this winter!^^ I am trying desperately to survive until then!!!

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Mid-term exams..

Today, it was Columbus day and we had a three day s off weekend. What I did was...studying, studying...and studying. Why?? it's because I am going to take mid-term exams this Thursday and Friday!!>< Since I am studying at the a college in the US, English (which is the second language for me) makes every all the material difficult for me to understand and I have to take more time to go over it. However, I will not give up! This is the way [path] I chose! I will be a good English speaker in the future and needed for a by society.

I promised with my important friends that we will have a hot pot party when I go back to Japan for a vacation this winter!^^ I am trying desperately to survive until then!!!

Hi Yuri-chan :)
Keep looking forward to that party, it will keep you motivated !
Andrew-san.

Notes:
1. (which is the second language for me) is a side note, or extra piece of information, and so should be in brackets.
2. path works better here than way

 

 

 

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 These are good paragraphs!!!

Maybe one thing you might change though is say it >>>> "English, which is my second language"  - that sounds a little better, I think.
 
It is probably hard to be so far from home - good luck!

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Mid-term exams..

It was Columbus day today and we had a three day weekend. What I did was...studying, studying...and more studying. Why?? It's because I am going to have mid-terms this Thursday and Friday!!>< Since I am studying at a college in the US, English (which is the second language for me) makes all the materials more difficult for me to understand and I have to take more time to go over them. However, I will not give up! This is the path I chose! I will be a good English speaker needed by society in the future.

I made promises with my important(good) friends that we will have a potluck party when I go back to Japan for a vacation this winter!^^ I am trying desperately to survive until then!!!

 

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Good luck! I wait for you in Japan!xD
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you're from japan? ouh im learning japanese. would you like to help me? I wanna be your friend, wont I?

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