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Dear Dan,
I am so glad to hear that you’re going to visit me in Macau for several weeks. I’ve arranged an available room which has been cleaned for you.
As you’ve told me, you’re planning to stay with me for three weeks. I assume that you should book the flight ticket advance at least one month so that you can get low-price of ticket, and please remember to buy round-trip ticket.
By the way, you’d better prepare some warm clothes in case you need them because of the bad weather. Recently, it’s been raining, and it’s quite chilly at night. In addition, don’t worry about eating, I’ll plan for you and show you around. There are few amazing restaurant which just near my house, or we can cook at my apartment.
Please let me know when your flight date will be, and I’ll see you soon.
Anna
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Could anyone help me to correct my letter ? Thank you :)
Dear Dan,
I am so glad to hear that you’re coming to visit me in Macau in several weeks. I’ve arranged for, as well as cleaned up, an available room for your use then. As you’ve informed me earlier, you intend to stay with me for three weeks. I would strongly suggest that you book a round-trip ticket at least one month in advance so that you can possibly obtain a lower-priced fare.
By the way, as insurance against the bad weather we've been experiencing here, you’d better bring some warm clothing in case you need them. Recently, it has not only been raining, but also been quite chilly at night. Furthermore, please don’t worry about what to do or what to eat while you are here--I’ll plan things out for you, as well as gladly show you around. There are quite a few amazingly good restaurants near my house, or we can simply cook meals for ourselves at my apartment.
Once you've booked your ticket, please let me know the date of your flight, and your arrival time. I look forward to seeing you soon!
Anna
Hi Koey CI Chan. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.
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Could anyone help me to correct my letter ? Thank you :)
Dear Dan,
I'm so glad to hear that you plan to visit me in Macau for a couple of weeks. I’ve arranged an available room which has been cleaned for you.
As you mentioned, you’re planning to stay with me for three weeks. I guess you should book your flight at least one month in advance so you can get a better price for your ticket, and remember to book it round-trip.
By the way, you should better pack some warm clothes in case you need them because of the bad weather. It’s been raining and quite chilly at night. And don’t worry about food, I’ll plan for you and show you around. There are a few amazing restaurants near my house, or we can cook in my apartment.
Please let me know the date of your arrival, and I’ll see you soon.
Anna
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Could anyone help me to correct my letter ? Thank you :)
Dear Dan,
I am so glad to hear that you’re going to visit me in Macau for several weeks. I’ve arranged an available room which has been cleaned for you.
As you’ve told me, you’re planning to stay with me for three weeks. I assume that you will book the flight ticket at least one month in advance so that you can a get low priced ticket, and please remember to buy a round-trip ticket.
By the way, you’d better prepare some warm clothes in case you need them because of the bad weather. Recently, it’s been raining, and it’s quite chilly at night. In addition, don’t worry about eating, I’ll plan for you and show you around. There are few amazing restaurants just near my house, or we can cook at my apartment.
Please let me know when your flight date will be, and I’ll see you soon.
Anna
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