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Today Today, That I devoted myself to studying seems the most worthy thing for me. I satisfied with my condition, while one of plans was not be achieved. (Digression: someone told me that you need forget someone you love when the reason for separation is that you can’t control. We have a great deal of memories,and as a result, your shadows always appears before my eyes. The fact which I must realize is the man who gave me a sea of warmth and accompanied me a long time no longer has anything to do with me. That is the saddest thing. I want to say:Thank you, goodbye .)

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Today, That I devoting myself to studying seems the most worthy thing for me to do. Although one of my plans has not been realized, I am satisfied with my condition.
(Digression: someone told me that you need forget someone you love when you have no control over the reason for separation is that you can’t control. We shared a great deal of memories, and as a result, your shadows always appears constantly before my eyes. The fact which I must realize is that the man who gave me a sea of warmth and accompanied stayed beside me a long time no longer has anything to do with me. That is the saddest thing. I just want to say thank you, and goodbye .)
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Today, That I devoted myself to studying it seemed the most worthy thing for me. I am satisfied with my condition, while though one of the plans was not be achieved.

(Digression: someone told me that you need to forget someone you love when the reason for separation is that one you can’t control.

We have a great deal of memories, and as a result, your shadows always appears before my eyes. The fact which I must realize is the man who gave me a sea of warmth and accompanied me a long time no longer has anything to do with me. That is the saddest thing. I want to say: Thank you, goodbye .)

(*hugs* I hope this helps Qing, that digression touched my heart)
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CORRECTION NO. 2: Today I devoted myself to studying, because it seemed like the most worthy thing for me to do. I am satisfied with my condition, even though one of my plans was not achieved. (Digression: Someone told me that you need to forget the one you love when you can't control the reason for separation.) We have a great deal of memories and, as a result, your shadow will always appear before my eyes. I realize the fact that the man who gave me a sea of warmth and accompanied me for a long time no longer wants anything to do with me. That is the saddest thing to me. Thank you and goodbye.

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