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I joined iTalki with the intent of learning Korean, since I love the culture and mostly watch Korean dramas. I was originally born in the Dominican Republic (so I can speak Spanish) but have been living in the United States since the age of 5. Even though I am not a teacher, I love providing feedback to those needing help with their English, at least the colloquial kind.
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    *<s>When my mom said</s> My Mother's Advice OR What My Mother Said

    When I think about <s>the motivation that do it to me learning</s> what motivated me to learn English, I remember when I was child and my mom would <s>said</s> say to me: "You are <s>so</s> young, but when you <s>will</s> grow up <s>you gone</s> I want you to remember these words: <s>You may</s> Learn English because it will be <s>is</s> very important for your life."
    <s>And</s> Now I remember<s>ed</s> <s>of all</s> my mom's advice<s>s</s> **<s>that my mom said</s>. <s>My soul</s> and <s>said to me</s> think to myself: <s>we can make another start, you know,</s> It's never too late to start and take a risk. ***<s>I´ll think a risk it because I wanna feel tough, and thinking about those words,</s> <s>one more time I´m here</s> So I'm now <s>practise</s> practicing my writing skills, trying to <s>make the best of</s> better myself. <s>as much as I can</s>. Thanks for reading.

    *To use the word "when" wouldn't apply because your story is about "what" your mother said and the "advice" she gave you.

    **If your mother gave you advice then it is the same as if "mom said" so no need to say it twice.

    ***I think I understand what you're trying to say, however, saying that you "wanna feel tough" wouldn't apply and doesn't make sense in this context. Usually, people wanna feel tough about something physical.
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    August 11, 2020
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    August 5, 2020
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    Today and the last year

    Today I attended my sister's graduation <s>garduation</s> dinner, which my uncle threw for her. <s>take it and</s> He invited lots of friends and relatives. <s>We take the dinner to celebrate my sister's graduation together.</s> (Remove this sentence because you already stated this in the first sentence) It makes me think about <s>the</s> <s>last year</s> when I graduated. <s>garduated</s> How time<s>s</s> flies! I remember<s>ed</s> how <s>that I'm</s> excited I was about moving <s>that I will go</s> to a <s>strange</s> new city, <s>to go to</s> <s>college</s> <s>and meet</s> seeing new things and making new <s>make</s> friends <s>with new person</s>. Over the last year, I have gained <s>learned</s> a lot of knowledge <s>which</s> about my major and <s>oral</s> speaking English <s>over the last year</s>. What <s>I have</s> has changed the most is that gradually I have become more active and <s>more</s> confident than before <s>gradually</s>. <s>By experiencing</s> The epidemic situation has made me realize <s>I know</s> that everyday we need to cherish life and <s>the</s> every person by our side, especially our families. <s>Cherish the life, cherish everyday.</s>
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    August 5, 2020
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    Trend Micro Security Blocks PowerShell.exe

    My father left a message on my home phone yesterday. He said that he had a question about his laptop. I called him back this evening. He asked me <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">about</s> what he should do with the pop-up messages from <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">by the</s> Trend Micro Security. I told <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">only could say to</s> him to please let me know if the pop-up messages keep showing up. He doesn't know much about computers <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">PC</s>, so it is hard to understand what <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">has</s> happened to <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">with</s> his laptop via the phone.
    When I Googled the message, I found that some people have the same problem. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">as I just googled about the message.</s> I will explain it to him tomorrow, but I wonder how I can help <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">make</s> him better understand. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">understood well</s>
    昨日家の留守電に父からのメッセージが入っていた。ノートパソコンで聞きたいことがあるということだ。今晩電話した。トレンドマイクロのセキュリティソフトがポップアップメッセージを頻繁に出すんだけど、どうすればいいかという質問だった。でも、「ずっとメッセージが出続けるようなら連絡して」としか言えなかった。父はパソコンに詳しくないので、父のパソコンに何が起こっているのかを電話だけで理解するのは難しい。
    そのメッセージについてグーグルで検索したら、同じ不具合で困っている人がいることを発見した。父に明日このことを説明しようと思うが、どう説明したら分かってもらえるかな。
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    August 5, 2020
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    My New <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">My</s> Hobby

    I have not written in my notebook for the last two years, but I want to start studying English again.

    Yesterday (remove comma) I rode a bicycle for the first time in five years, because I hesitated to get on a train due to the coronavirus.

    I noticed that I felt very fresh when riding <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">I was getting</s> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">on</s> the bicycle. There were new discoveries <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">that</s> I hadn't <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">could not</s> noticed when riding <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">using</s> the train.

    So, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">getting</s> <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">on</s> riding bicycles has become <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">became</s> my new hobby.
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    August 3, 2020
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    My boyfriend hurt his knee while he was playing basketball in <s>the</s> college several years ago, <s>in the college</s> but he didn’t take it seriously.

    As a result, nowadays <s>it turns out that</s> he can barely do any exercises. <s>these years.</s> <s>Every time</s> When he <s>tries</s> attempts certain moves, <s>to do some postures</s> like rotating his knee, he reinjures himself. <s>the tragedy happens</s>. <s>The bones of knee get dislocated</s> He feels pain when he dislocates his knee <s>and he feels pain only if this occurs, which means</s> but otherwise his knee <s>works</s> feels fine <s>in normal time</s>.

    He finally made up his mind to see a doctor a month ago. The doctor told him that he would lose his knee in 5 to 10 years if he kept ignoring this problem.
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    July 22, 2020
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    July 22, 2020
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    This quarantine is driving me crazy!

    Sometimes (remove comma) I feel like <s>I am</s> I'm stuck inside myself. <s>I'd like</s> I wake up and realize my life is not the same <s>way</s> as before <s>of</s> this insane moment. <s>but unfortunately I'm not more the same</s> Now we have to learn this new lifestyle and keep going.
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    July 22, 2020
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    If you were a super-hero, what powers would you like to have?

    Well, I’d like to have two powers. <s>In first place</s> First, to fly. When I was a child I always liked this power because I could go anywhere. <s>In second place,</s> Second, I’d choose the power to render oneself invisible because I might do many interesting things (and funny things, of course).
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    July 22, 2020
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    Hello there everyone!

    (I don't understand what you're trying to say or convey in this sentence.) We don't consider that we need to repeat lenghty words due to the fact that you already have known who.

    If you are seeking a reliable <s>reliability</s> computer service <s>centre</s> representative then <s>. You</s> <s>can</s> contact us. <s>In the only word</s> We are better than all <s>of</s> the so called experts, so <s>So</s> you can <s>may</s> trust that your electronic devices will be in the capable <s>capalible</s> hands of an expert. Our guess is that there are <s>very</s> few experts left like us <s>ours</s> in the city where you live. <s>cities you lived in</s>
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    July 22, 2020
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