About Me Part 2

I spend my whole day, between work and family and it's very hard. I believe that nowadays, to raise two children is more difficult than in the past, because they do more activities than we did. For this these reasons, I don't have much free time. However, when I can, I like doing Pilates to stay fit and feel good. I also like cooking for my family and friends; I enjoy have guests over. I like following cooking blogs, in order to learn new recipes. Furthermore, I like reading the news every day, because I want to keep informed and I enjoy following politics. That's a little bit about me, I hope to learn things about you in the months to come.

Take Care,

Anna

Again Anna, you did a great job! I noticed some capitalization issues, and issues related to word choice, which I re-wrote and corrected. I wanted to draw your attention to the phrase "grow up". "Growing up", is what children do, in this context, as a parent, you need to use the word "raise", as it makes a lot more sense, because you are a parent. I hope my explanation on this point was clear. Finally, I had to re-write the last part of your letter, so it would flow in context. I really enjoyed that you used the word "furthermore"! That can be a complicated word for native English speakers to use correctly and in the right way; you used "furthermore" perfectly! Please let me know if you have any questions!