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Really grateful for any corrections - short message of thoughts Good morning to everyone! I am glad to share my thoghts with you and I am really grateful for any corrections. Infact I am aware that you are donating your time to me. I do the same with other people in the italian Language, but I found this act really satisfacting. I make that spontaneously with love, witout expecting nothing. Anyway, after the worst period of Coronavirus I am starting to feel better and even my body is reacting in a different way. I start to feel again energy, to be positive and really costructive. Even if someone tells me something bad, I react in a positive way. Negative words, negative thoughts don't enter my mind. I transform them in positive energy, thoughts and love.

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I'm really grateful for any corrections - short message of thoughts

Good morning to everyone! I'm glad to be sharing my thoughts with you and I'm really grateful for any corrections.
"I am" is not wrong, but "I'm" sounds more natural. Especially when you are writing informally.

In fact, I am aware and grateful that you are donating your time to me. In fact, I do the same with for other people learning Italian. in the italian Language, but found I find this act really satisfying. I make do it that spontaneously with love, witout expecting nothing in return.

Anyway, after the worst period of Coronavirus I am starting to feel better and even my body is reacting in a different way. I'm starting to feel have again energy again, to be positive, and be really productive costructive.

Even if someone tells me something bad, I react in a positive way. Negative words and negative thoughts don't enter my mind. I transform them into positive energy, thoughts, and love.

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Hi Elena! I'm glad to hear you're feeling better and to find one of your posts to help you with. You've corrected so many of mine so it's nice to repay the favor. Take care. Alla prossima :)
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Really grateful for any corrections - short message of thoughts

Good morning to everyone! I am glad happy to share my thoughts with you and I am really grateful for any corrections. In fact, I am aware that you are donating your taking the time to help me. I do the same with other people in the Italian Language, but and for me it is I found this act really satisfying. I make do that it spontaneously with love, without expecting anything.
Anyway, after the worst period of Coronavirus, I am starting to feel better and even my body is reacting in a different way. I'm starting to feel energetic again, to be positive and really constructive. Even if someone tells me something bad, I react in a positive way. Negative words, negative and thoughts don't enter my mind. I transform them into positive energy, thoughts and love.

Ciao Elena, not too bad.
Glad gives the feeling of being happy with relief that something bad didn't happen. It is not completely wrong, but happy sounds better.
The same with "donating your time" - it isn't wrong, but the common expression is "taking the time".
"Make" is more fabbricare/creare; "do" is more fare, (an action).
In English, "without expecting nothing" is a double negative, which would form a positive. I know in Italian that is ok, but English works differently.
Energy is the noun; energetic is the adjective.
I hope that helps. Keep practicing! Simón.
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Really grateful for any corrections - short message of thoughts

Good morning to everyone! I am glad to share my thoughts with you and I am really grateful for any corrections. In fact I am aware that you are donating your time to me. I do the same with other people in the Italian language, but I found this act really satisfying. I make that do it spontaneously with love, without expecting anything nothing (alternatively, you can write "expecting nothing").
Anyway, after the worst period of the corona virus, I am starting to feel better and even my body is reacting in a different way. I start have begun to feel again energy again, to be positive and really constructive. Even if someone tells me something bad, I react in a positive way. Negative words, negative thoughts don't enter my mind. I transform them into positive energy, thoughts and love.

Great text, few mistakes, and nothing that makes it hard to understand :) And I'm happy that you're beginning to feel better again, despite the pandemic! Hope you are well!

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