The rainy day
It rained cats and dogs when I was going shopping last Friday. I picked up an umbrella in the convenient store. I was get wet in the rain. My friend pulled the car into the place where I was to picked me up. I appreciated him so much. I put my stuff on the rear seat, and took a nap in the car. Thanks to him that I could go home smoothly.
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The Rainy Day
It rained cats and dogs when I was going shopping last Friday. I picked up an umbrella in the convenience store. I was get wet in the rain. (either "was wet in the rain" or "got wet in the rain") My friend pulled the car into the place where I was to picked me up. (either "and picked me up" or "to pick me up") I appreciated him so much. I put my stuff on the rear seat, and took a nap in the car. Thanks to him that I could go I got home smoothly. (smoothly doesn't go well here - safely/without a problem
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It rained cats and dogs when I went shopping last Friday. I picked up an umbrella at the convenience store. I got wet in the rain. My friend pulled his car into the place where I was supposed to be picked up. I appreciated him so much. I put my stuff in the back seat and took a nap in the car. Thanks to him, I went home smoothly.
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The rainy day
It rained cats and dogs when I was going shopping last Friday. I picked up an umbrella in the convenience store, because I was getting wet in the rain. My friend pulled the car into the place where I was to be picked me up. I appreciated him so much. I put my stuff on the back rear seat and took a nap in the car. Thanks to him, that I could go home smoothly.
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