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Creating a Healthy Routine. We are always trying to improve our health, or at least we should be. Some habits are difficult to get and others are difficult to lose. In general, to change is not an easy path. But it's not because of that we should give up. A good way to introduce a new routine is to start with small steps. Like start meditating five minutes a day, or fifteen minutes of exercise three days a week, and so on. After a few days the new condition will be more established and it will start to get easier.

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Creating a Healthy Routine.

We are always trying to improve our health, or at least we should be.
Some habits are difficult to adopt get and others are difficult to get rid of lose.
In general, to change is not an easy path.
But it's not because of what that we should give up.
A good way to introduce a new routine into your life is to start with small (baby) steps.
Like Start meditating five minutes a day, or do fifteen minutes of exercise three days a week, and so on.
After a few days the new condition habit will become more established and it will start to get easier.
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Creating a Healthy Routine.

We are always trying to improve our health, or at least we should be.
Some habits are difficult to start and others are difficult to lose.
In general, there isn't an easy path to changing.
But it's not because of that we should give up.
A good way to introduce a new routine is to start with small steps. ("baby steps" is a good expression for this)
For example, starting to meditate five minutes a day, or exercising for fifteen minutes three days a week, etc.
After a while, the new habit will become more established and it will become easier.
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Creating a Healthy Routine.

We are always trying to improve our health, or at least we should be.
Some habits are difficult to get achieve/acquire and others are difficult to lose.
In general, to change is not an easy path.
But, it's not because of that we should give up we should not give up because of that.
A good way to introduce a new routine is to start with small steps.
Like start Start meditating five minutes a day, or fifteen minutes of exercise three days a week, and so on.
After a few days the new condition will be more established and it will start to get easier.
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Creating a Healthy Routine.

We are always trying to improve our health, or at least we should be.
Some habits are difficult to get acquire (Note 1) and others are difficult to lose break.
In general, to change is not an easy path.
But it's we should not give up because of that. (Note 2)
A good way to introduce a new routine is to start with small steps.
Like Start meditating five minutes a day for example, or doing fifteen minutes of exercise three days a week, and so on.
After a few days the new condition routine (Note 3) will be more established and it will start to get easier.


You did very well with this text! I made some corrections and changed the word order in one sentence.

Note 1 Although it seems like English speakers (Ok, maybe just Americans) use "get" for everything, there are better choices in this situation. I chose "acquire" but "form" and "develop" could be used here too. Note that "break" is very commonly used to talk about giving up a bad habit.

Note 2 You had all of the right words in your sentence, they just needed to be placed in a different order to sound natural in English.

Note 3 "Condition" does not really work as a synonym for "habit".

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