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爱情/ hsk四级练习 In my hsk4 book the first topic is Love and relationships. The aim of this text is to practise this tòpic. 除了找到男/女朋友的方面爱情有其他的好处。对我来说一个重要的爱情优点是改变一个人的生活。 到了二十岁时候大部分的人的性格已经稳定。都人知道喜欢什么样的爱好,电影,音乐,运动,朋友,什么的。因为这样的生活很舒服,所以我们不想改变, 认识·新的人打扰我们。 偶尔我们可能改变生活。 也许由于经济的原因我们可能找到新的工作, 也许生严重的病, 也许为了工作我们移民。 然而甚至在大改变的时候,人还不想改变性格,爱好。 不过,爱情可能有那么大的影响对我们。结果可以打开我们的主意。爱上的时候我们很想熟悉爱人。无论他有如何的爱好,虽然爱人的爱好对我们好像不适合的,即使我们以前讨厌这样的活动, 但是我们突然都很愿意试一试。总起来说爱情不仅可能使我们幸福,还可以打开我们的主意。 Apart from finding a boyfriend / girlfriend love also has other advantages. I think that an important point of Love is that it can change our lives. Once we reach the age of 20 most people have already defined their character. They know what kind of hobbies they like, films, music, sports, friends, and so on. Because this type of life is comfortable, we don’t want to change, Meeting new people molests us. Occasionally we can change our lives. Maybe due to economic changes we can look for a new job. Maybe if we become seriously ill, maybe we emigrate to find work. However, even in times of big changes people don’t want to change their personalities or interests. However, Love can have such a big influence on us. The result can change our ideas. When we fall in love we want to know deeply the person we love. Whatever hobbies they have, although the hobbies don’t suit us, even if before we hated those activities. But suddenly we are prepared to try. To sum up love can not only make us happy but can also change our lives.

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爱情/ hsk四级练习

In my hsk4 book the first topic is Love and relationships. The aim of this text is to practise this tòpic.

除了找到男/女朋友的方面爱情有其他的好处。对我来说一个重要的爱情优点是改变一个人的生活。

爱情,除了意味着会找到男女朋友,还有很多其他的益处,比如,在我看来,爱情可能会改变一个人的生活。
到了二十岁时候大部分的人的性格已经稳定。都人知道喜欢什么样的爱好,电影,音乐,运动,朋友,什么的。因为这样的生活很舒服,所以我们不想改变, 认识·新的人打扰我们。
大部分人在20岁时性格已基本定型,人们很清楚自己喜欢什么,比如,电影,音乐,运动,结识朋友,等等。人们自在地生活着,不想改变,也不愿冒险被新认识的朋友打扰自己的生活。
偶尔我们可能改变生活。也许由于经济的原因我们可能找到新的工作, 也许生严重的病, 也许为了工作我们移民。
然而甚至在大改变的时候,人还不想改变性格,爱好。
有时人们会出于种种原因而改变现有的生活,比如因为经济原因换工作,因为患了重病,或是为了工作而移民。但即使在做出这些重大改变时,人们的性格和爱好通常都不会改变。

不过,爱情可能有那么大的影响对我们。结果可以打开我们的主意。爱上的时候我们很想熟悉爱人。无论他有如何的爱好,虽然爱人的爱好对我们好像不适合的,即使我们以前讨厌这样的活动, 但是我们突然都很愿意试一试。总起来说爱情不仅可能使我们幸福,还可以打开我们的主意。
爱情是一个例外,它带来的影响会改变人们的想法。当一个人坠入爱河时,他想知道关于爱人的一切,包括她的爱好,哪怕她的爱好和自己的不同,甚至是自己曾经讨厌的,当爱情来临时,他也突然很想尝试。爱情啊,不仅给人们带来了幸福,还打开了另一扇窗,一片新的视野。

Apart from finding a boyfriend / girlfriend love also has other advantages. I think that an important point of Love is that it can change our lives.
Once we reach the age of 20 most people have already defined their character. They know what kind of hobbies they like, films, music, sports, friends, and so on. Because this type of life is comfortable, we don’t want to change, Meeting new people molests us.
Occasionally we can change our lives. Maybe due to economic changes we can look for a new job. Maybe if we become seriously ill, maybe we emigrate to find work.
However, even in times of big changes people don’t want to change their personalities or interests.
However, Love can have such a big influence on us. The result can change our ideas. When we fall in love we want to know deeply the person we love. Whatever hobbies they have, although the hobbies don’t suit us, even if before we hated those activities. But suddenly we are prepared to try.
To sum up love can not only make us happy but can also change our lives.
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爱情/ hsk四级练习

In my hsk4 book the first topic is Love and relationships. The aim of this text is to practise this tòpic.

除了找到男/女朋友的方面,爱情还有其他方便的好处。对我来说一个重要的好处是改变一个人的生活。
到了二十岁时候大部分的人的性格已经稳定。人们都知道自己有什么样的爱好,如喜欢什么样电影,音乐,运动,朋友,什么的。因为这样的生活我们习惯了觉得很舒服,所以我们不想改变, 认识新的人会影响我们原来的生活轨迹。
偶尔我们也要改变我们自己原来生活。 也许由于经济的原因我们要找新的工作, 也许会生病,并且比较严重, 也许为了工作我们还有可能要移民。
然而生活,工作发生比较大变化的时候,人们还不想改变性格,爱好。
不过,爱情的力量非常大,可能会大大的改变我们的生活。两个人相爱的时候,我们非常希望了解爱人。无论他有什么样的爱好,虽然爱人的爱好并不是自己的爱好,即使我们以前讨厌这样的活动, 但是我们都很愿意试一试。总体来说爱情不仅可以使我们幸福,还可以打开我们的视野,尝试不同的爱好。
Apart from finding a boyfriend / girlfriend love also has other advantages. I think that an important point of Love is that it can change our lives.
Once we reach the age of 20 most people have already defined their character. They know what kind of hobbies they like, films, music, sports, friends, and so on. Because this type of life is comfortable, we don’t want to change, Meeting new people molests us.
Occasionally we can change our lives. Maybe due to economic changes we can look for a new job. Maybe if we become seriously ill, maybe we emigrate to find work.
However, even in times of big changes people don’t want to change their personalities or interests.
However, Love can have such a big influence on us. The result can change our ideas. When we fall in love we want to know deeply the person we love. Whatever hobbies they have, although the hobbies don’t suit us, even if before we hated those activities. But suddenly we are prepared to try.
To sum up love can not only make us happy but can also change our lives.
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Thanks for the sentence Ari. It sounds good. You are more poetic than I am.
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爱一个人会想试着去用他/她的眼光去看这个世界
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学习HSK4第一课的感想,写得很好,观点新颖。加油。

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