Priority Seat

I prefer to take the MRT as a public transportation in Taipei city than instead of the bus. The MRT is so convenient that nobody will be block off. There are plenty of stations, so you don't need to walk far (I think this is what you meant?). Even the disabled who are sitting on the wheelchairs can go here and there.

But the problem is those people who don’t use wheelchairs, such as the senior citizens, pregnant women, the blind …etc. If they go in the by train (which packs in the people like sardines), there won’t be any seats for them unless there are priority seats. Most of Taiwanese people won’t sit on them it, but still a small number of healthy people occupy those rare seats. According to my observations in these the past few months, the majority of occupants are young who will play with their smart phones or pretend to sleep immediately as once they sit down.

I don’t know what these young girls and boys are thinking and what’s wrong with them. I consider this it as a serious thing because no one can be always be young and healthy.

I hope this helps.. You are very good at English! The main problem you are having is with when to make words plural.

Priority Seat

I prefer to take the MRT as a for public transportation in Taipei city rather than taking the bus. MRT is so convenient and accessible to everyone that nobody will be block off. Even the disabled who are sit on the wheelchairs can travel anywhere go here and there.

But the problem is for those people who don’t use wheelchairs such as the senior citizens, pregnant women, the blind …etc. If they go in the train which packs in the people like sardines, there won’t be any seats for them unless there are priority seats. Most of Taiwanese people won’t sit on in it those seats, but still a small number of healthy people still occupy those rare limited seats. According to my observation in these past few months, the majority of occupants are young people who will play with their smart phone or pretend to sleep immediately as soon as they sit down.

I don’t know what these young girls and boys are thinking and what’s wrong with them. I consider it this as a serious thing because no one can be always young and health.

#这篇文章很有意思。我是年轻人，但认为应该尊敬老年。现代，很多年轻人不礼貌，不服从规矩。我很感谢我的父母交握着借记本的事。