Long Time Friendship

Today, I took my father to meet his old friend. As All I know knew, is that they have had been keeping friendship friends for more than 60 years. Now, My father is now in his 90s. Actually, Uncle Fang was the matchmaker of to my parents. He and my father They were classmates and Auntie 1 Fang was my mom’s friend. The two old ladies wives had passed away for many years. Our The two old men still canwalk about easily and still have a good appetite. eat happily. I like to listen that when they reminisced about their days of yore. talk about their young time. There are Such vivid and lively expressions showing up on their faces, charming and attracting. I am feel so lucky that I can be shared peek2 into their memories now and then.

I do believe that you have made improvements in your writing.  The only thing that holds you back is your limited vocabuarly.  Continue to write more and get corrected.  This way your vocabulary builds as I introduced more appropriate words in that particular setting.  Good job.

1.   Auntie is more of an endearment term than "aunt".

2.   Nothing wrong with the word, "share".  It is through such usage of words that makes your essay apart from others.

Long Time Friendship

Today, I took my father to meet his old friend, Uncle Fang.

As far as I knew know, they have been keeping friendship friends for more than 60 years. Now, my father is in his 90s nineties.

“As far as I know" means that you are only know some general facts and not the specifics

"in my #s" means that your age falls in that range "I am in my twenties"  ; Remember to write out the number

Actually, Uncle Fang was the matchmaker of my parents.

He and my father were classmates and Aunt Fang was my mom’s friend. The two old ladies hadve long since passed away for years. Our But the two old men still can walk and eat happily.

I like to listen that they to them talk about their young time (childhood days).

小时候 = childhood

There Their faces are vivid and lively when they talk expressions on their faces, charming and attracting. I am so lucky that I can be shared they share their memories with me.

#Nice post.  I enjoyed reading about this wonderful friendship.  Friendship is really a treasure!

# 我好好享受这篇文章。友谊真宝贵啊