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I'd really appreciate if someone sould help me with this. Thanks for advance.
The Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD) is a genetic neurobehavioral disorder. It occurs especially in children and adolescents, and their earliest symptoms are presented at school-age. Because of this, the disorder can have a negative effect on a child's schooling, on their ability develop literacy skills, and in logico-mathematical reasoning. Moreover, it can also seriously disrupt a child's social-life and ability to express emotions. Although there is no cure for the disorder, its symptoms can be alleviated with medication and certain other non-medical treatments. The present research aims to get a clear understanding of the disorder, to identify both its symptoms and causes, and proposes intervention-strategies that aim to provide students with relevant knowledge, attention and educational support.The Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (ADHD) is a neurobehavioral disorder caused by genetic factors. ADHD is more prevalent in children and adolescents. Early symptoms present in childhood. Because of this, the disorder can have consequences on the child's ability to learn. In the acquisition of reading, writing and logical-mathematical reasoning, can be especially difficult. In addition, ADHA can cause serious difficulties in the social and emotional development of the child. Although there is no cure for the disorder, its symptoms can be alleviated through the use of medication and other non-drug interventions. The present work aims to understand the disorder, identify its symptoms and causes, and propose intervention strategies with the aim of improving students' knowledge, giving them greater attention and educational support.
I'd really appreciate if someone could help me with this. Thanks in advance.
Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder (or, ADHD) is a neurobehavioral disorder caused by genetic factors and is predominant in children and adolescents. Its symptoms typically manifest at school age, and because of this, the disorder can have serious consequences for the educational development of the child. Not only does it interfere with the acquisition of reading, writing and logical-mathematical comprehension, but it also creates serious barriers to the social and emotional growth of the child. Although there is no cure for the disorder, the alleviation of many of its symptoms is possible with the use of medication and other non-drug interventions.
The present work aims to understand the disorder, identify its symptoms and causes, and to propose intervention strategies--all with the aim of recognizing and dealing with an affected student’s condition, as well as providing him or her with greater attention and educational support.
Hi, Aline. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, and for ease of readings. Apologies if I have misinterpreted! I hope that this helps you. J.
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