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The sound of the summer Every single morning I can’t enjoy watching TV or listening to the music whatever during the summer. This situation reminded me when I lived around the airport. Have you ever heard that buzz of cicadas? Is that true that a lot of Europeans has never heard that’s sound? In Japan, the buzz of cicadas is one of the sounds of the summer. They use it as a season word. You may come across the scene on the film that you can hear that buzzing without any appearance. There’s a rumor about it. The film is edited, because they can’t understand what is meaning of that sound.

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The sound of the summer

Every single morning I can’t enjoy watching TV or listening to the music whatever during the summer. This situation reminded me of the time when I lived around near to the airport.

Have you ever heard that buzz of cicadas? Is it true that a lot of Europeans have never heard that sound?

In Japan, the buzz of cicadas is one of the sounds of the summer. They ("We" would fit if you are talking about your fellow Japanese citizens) use it as a season word. You may come across the scene on the film a scene in a film in which you can hear that buzzing without any appearance. There’s a rumor about it: the film is edited, because they can’t understand what is the meaning of that sound.

 

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Refer to the comments of my original correction.  Yumi had clarified of her intent in the first paragraph.  So I am rewritting the first paragraph to convey her sentiment.

 

The Sound of the Summer

Every single summer morning I can’t cannot enjoy watching TV, listening to the music or whatever else I need to do. during the summer. That incessant sound of buzzing is driving me nuts1.  This miserable situation reminded me when I was living lived around near the airport.

Have you ever heard that Ever heard of buzzing of cicadas? Is that it true that a lot of many Europeans has never had the "pleasure" of hearing it heard of it that’s sound?

The most significant change besides the obvious is the quoted "pleasure".  It is a sarcasm meaning that it is no pleasure at all but a nuisance!

1.   Or you can use the word "crazy".

The rest remains as corrected originally.


In Japan, the buzz of cicadas is one of the sounds of the summer. They use it as a season word. You may come across the scene on the film that you can hear that buzzing without any appearance. There’s a rumor about it. The film is edited, because they can’t understand what is meaning of that sound.

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The Sound of the Summer1

Every single morning Every summer morning, I can’t cannot enjoy watching TV or listening to the music whatever during the summer. because of the incessant buzz of cicadas. This situation reminded me when I lived around near the airport.
Have you ever heard that Ever heard of buzzing of cicadas? Is that it true that a lot of many Europeans has never had the pleasure of hearing it heard of it that’s sound?


In Japan, the buzz of cicadas is one of the sounds of the summer. They use it as a season wordIt is a flowery description for summer. You may come across it in a movie the scene on the film that you can hear that where there is buzzing but with no other visual clues. without any appearance. There’s a rumor about it. The that this scene was film is edited out because they can’t didn't understand what is meaning of that the significance of the sound.

Again another delightful piece of writing.  I am so glad that you are writing.  I look forward to them.  Daniel's correction is great.  However I am not correcting yours.  I think you are beyond that basic level.  What I am doing is editing it to make it sparkle like a diamond.  I want you to be able to write and express clearly like your former lady minister, yuriki koike, "Unsafe At Any Speed"

http://www.project-syndicate.org/commentary/koike20/English

1.  You need to capitalize every first letter of every word in a title.  Alternate title, "Summer Sound", "Sound of Summer"

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Thank you for your comment, James. I’m glad that the rumor is not false. Then what make you feel that summer has come in Europe? I hear the sound of Meimuna opalifera today. Its means that summer will over soon.
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Thank you, Daniel. I may have different impression if I hear its sound in Australia. I guess I feel homesick for Japanese festival.

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