This is the my first article.

Hello!

My name is Yumi from Japan. I’m interested to improve in improving my English writing. That’s why I jointed this site. This is the first time to that I wrote contribute an article here.
So, let me introduce myself first.

I love reading, singing, playing with our dog, and traveling the world. My favorite musician is Norah Jones. Our dog is a French bulldog named kyo. I’ll write about her sometime in the near future.

I had stayed and gone to studied in a US high-school in USA for one year.  At that time, I was dreaming that I would be able to speak skillfully English in a few years' time. But 1 Actually, it had been a long time has passed since I came back to Japan. I am afraid that I can’t speak and write correct good English now.

I guess this is the chance to study again.  I’d love to have a good command of English. Then I can want to recommend tell everyone in the world how beautiful country Japan is, and exchange with people in the every countries.

Thank you for reading.

Nonsense, you write better than most!  Your one year stay in the US certainly bore fruit.  Except for minor errors here and there, your command of the language is good.  One more comment.  You don't need to leave a new line when beginning with a new sentence.  You are not writing poetry.  I hope to see you write more.  It is the only way to improve your English without having to live in an English country.

1.  Don't begin a sentence with "but" and "And".  These are conjunctions used to connect sentences in the middle.  If you want to start a sentence with a conjunction, use "however", "since", "although" etc.

This is the first article.

Hello!

My name is Yumi and I'm from Japan.
I’m interested hoping to use this community to improve my English writing skills.
That’s why I joined this site.

This is the first time that I to contribute an article, so let me introduce myself first.

I love reading, singing, playing with our dog, and traveling ("travelling" in British/Australian English) the world.
My favorite ("favourite" in British/Australian English) musician is Norah Jones.
Our dog is a French bulldog named Kyo.
I’ll write about her sometime in the near future.

I had stayed and gone went to high-school in the USA for one year.
At that time I was dreaming that I would be able to speak skillfully within a few years.
But actually However, a long time has passed since I came back to Japan and I am afraid that I can’t speak and write correct English now.

I guess this is the chance to study again. I’d love to have a good command of English.

Then I want to recommend how beautiful country Japan is, and exchange with people in the every countries.

When I have achieved that, I then want to exchange culture with - and recommend my beautiful country of Japan to - people throughout the world.

Thank you for reading.