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Tourism effects 250 words Is tourism Always positive? Since the last 10 years, it is clear that tourism has been increasing, because of lower costs of trasports or more buildings in which to sleep etc. But,is Tourism Always positive ? Generally speaking,people love travelling all around the world,but, unfortunately,they do not ask themself if they behaviour in a correct way. In fact,in my opinion ,tourism is not as good as people think. first of all, tourism is going to be uncontrolled.Everyone can travel from a place to another, in many cases, without any sort of identification. Secondly, people, when go abroad ,usually act in a uncosciousness way,because they are on vacation. So, it is very common find unpolite tourists who put their rubber everywhere. FInally,I would give you a particular example of a small city in Italy. Venice is one of the major city in the world for number of tourists, but because of its dimension, it is very small city with very little streets, it is getting unliveble for their local inhabitants due to the mass tourism. It is obvious that tourism have also a lot of advantages.For example, it helps cities from an economic point of view,and creates job places. What I really what to say is that,even though tourism is an import aspect of economy,it is a shame to harm beautiful destinations only for economic interesting.

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Tourism's effects in 250 words

Is tourism always positive?

Since For the last ten (<--It's better to write numbers less than twelve as words.) years, it is clear that tourism has been increasing because of lower costs of transportation or and lodging, more buildings in which to sleep etc., but is tourism always positive?

Generally speaking, people love travelling all around the world, but, unfortunately, they do not always ask themselves if they behave in a correct respectful ways.
In fact, in my opinion, tourism is not as good as people may think.
First of all, tourism is going to be uncontrolled hard to control. Everyone Anyone can travel from a one place to another, and in many cases, without any sort of identification.

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Secondly, people, when people go abroad, they usually act in a uncosciousness unprofessional ways because they are on vacation. So Thus, it is very common find impolite tourists who put their rubber litter everywhere.
Finally, I would will give you a particular example of a small city in Italy. Venice is one of the major cities in the world for that attracts a large number of tourists, but because of its dimension, it is very small city with very little narrow streets, and it is getting unlivable for their local inhabitants due to the mass tourism.
It is obvious that tourism has also a lot of advantages. For example, it helps cities from an economic point of view and creates jobs places.
What I really what to say is that, even though tourism is an import aspect of economy, it is a shame to harm beautiful destinations only for economic interests.

Here you go, Anita. I hope my corrections help, and I definitely agree with you that tourism can irritate many people.

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