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Today. ..∩▽∩.. Today,I had a picnic with my friends.We took a lot of food there.We ate them under a big tree. ..∩ω∩.. Eating..eating..∪ω∪..eating... Suddenly! ⊙﹏⊙ I found a thing! Many vampires were eating too!They were eating my blood ....x__x The vampires we called mosquitoes.They were so nasty!I had to fighting them as I was eating.But why the mosquitoes only bite me?..T . T..Does my blood taste delicious?At last,they flew away,because they were full....but I wasn't.Of course they were not eat for free,they left me several stings for thanks!(*+﹏+*)~ And the stings were so itch,make me crazy.\( ̄<  ̄)> ahh..except the mosquitoes,I was so happy today.But very tired.Maybe I will have a long long sleep later.

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Today.

..∩▽∩.. Today,I had a picnic with my friends.We took a lot of food there.We ate them under a big tree. ..∩ω∩.. Eating..eating..∪ω∪..eating...
Suddenly! ⊙﹏⊙ I found a thing! Many vampires were eating feasting too!They were eating sucking on my blood ....x__x They vampires are what we called mosquitoes.They were are so nasty!I had to fighting them as I was eating ate.  But why the mosquitoes only bite meWhy are they only feasting on me?..T . T..Does Is my blood taste that delicious? At last, they flew away,because when they were full had their fill....but I wasn't. Of course they were not eat for free they had a free lunch leaving ,they left me with several stings.   for thanksTHANKS A LOT!(*+﹏+*)~ And the The stings were so itch,make me itch like crazy.\( ̄<  ̄)>

Argghhh..Except for those blood suckers, the mosquitoes,I was so happy today.Bbut very tired.  Maybe I will have a long long sleep nap later.

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me too ! +ω+
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i hate mosquitoes.
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yehh ..I hate them ..≥﹏≤
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evil mosquitoes >_<

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