My presentation letter

In October I’m going to conclude my experience in Italian voluntary service in a hospital. My role is to help with indications [I am not sure what you mean by "indications". Do you mean "intakes", which is finding out why someone has come to the hospital?] and administrative assistance. I work mainly with elderly or foreigners. In this project I learnt have learned a lot about me myself. I found a very sensitive and empathic empathetic side of my character that I did not know before, and that I love doing something for everyone things for people.

I am applying to this project because I am a university student and, although being quite near to my graduation, I would like to take a break from my studies, to leave Italy, change my habits, meet new people and make new experiences [In English, you "have new experiences" or you "make new memories"]. At the same time it would be wonderful to do something similar to what I have studied. I attended studied chemistry, mainly because I would like to work at some point of my life in some environmental monitoring association.

I think to fit perfectly in I would be a perfect fit for this project as because I have already done some similar experiences work. and I could bring to the table something I have done in the past. [Could you be more specific here? What are some of these things that you could bring to the table? What specific skills do you have?] Also it would be perfect to share my studies and my passions, like explaining the importance of environmental sustainability, recycling and pollution.

Regards,
Martina

Hello, Martina,

You have a good grasp of English. Your sentences are very clear and I am able to follow the flow of your ideas. At the beginning you should add a sentence about what project you're applying for, something like "I am interested in the Administrative Assistant position advertised at Massachusetts General Hospital."

This letter gives a lot about what the program could offer you -- take a break from your studies, change your habits, meet new people, and have new experiences -- but not as much about what skills and experiences you could offer them. Can you include some more details about the work you've done?

I hope this is helpful.

Sincerely,

Owen Grey