Full Time Job and a Part Time Course!

I am writing to ask whether it is possible to postpone my cooking course in the until next month or not. Unfortunately, I am very tired in this period at this time due to working, and the course is becoming more and more advanced too, so it is almost impossible for me to attend at the class with a good profit to profit from your course.

At work we are delivering our goods in to every part of the world and the request of our I.T. items [I am not sure what you mean here. Does your company sell I.T. items? If so, revise it to "the requests for our products are" if you are talking about the number of orders or to "the demand for our products is" if you are talking about people's desire for your company's product.] is also increasing day after day, therefore at the end of my workday I am very tired. [This part of the sentence isn't necessary because you said you were tired in the first paragraph.]

Furthermore, our your marvelous course needs more attention than usual in the last weeks. In particular, the topics are very difficult to understand, and the subjects takes [The verb "takes" can refer back to the noun "topics".] more time to be memorized as well.

I would like to know if your chief department [Do you mean the person in charge of the department? Americans would probably say "department head" or "supervisor".] could would agree to move my timetable allow me to take lessons in the next month, when I would surely have time to take give the lessons my full attention. Moreover, my boss, who understood understands the situation, has already accepted agreed to give me some days off from work during that period then.

I Thank you in advance, and I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.

Yours sincerely,
Peter Parker

This is very well written, Stefano. I hope my suggestions are helpful. If you have questions about them, ask in the comments or message me and I'll happily respond. Sincerely, Owen

My presentation letter

In October I’m going to conclude my experience in Italian voluntary service in a hospital. My role is to help with indications [I am not sure what you mean by "indications". Do you mean "intakes", which is finding out why someone has come to the hospital?] and administrative assistance. I work mainly with elderly or foreigners. In this project I learnt have learned a lot about me myself. I found a very sensitive and empathic empathetic side of my character that I did not know before, and that I love doing something for everyone things for people.

I am applying to this project because I am a university student and, although being quite near to my graduation, I would like to take a break from my studies, to leave Italy, change my habits, meet new people and make new experiences [In English, you "have new experiences" or you "make new memories"]. At the same time it would be wonderful to do something similar to what I have studied. I attended studied chemistry, mainly because I would like to work at some point of my life in some environmental monitoring association.

I think to fit perfectly in I would be a perfect fit for this project as because I have already done some similar experiences work. and I could bring to the table something I have done in the past. [Could you be more specific here? What are some of these things that you could bring to the table? What specific skills do you have?] Also it would be perfect to share my studies and my passions, like explaining the importance of environmental sustainability, recycling and pollution.

Regards,
Martina

Hello, Martina,

You have a good grasp of English. Your sentences are very clear and I am able to follow the flow of your ideas. At the beginning you should add a sentence about what project you're applying for, something like "I am interested in the Administrative Assistant position advertised at Massachusetts General Hospital."

This letter gives a lot about what the program could offer you -- take a break from your studies, change your habits, meet new people, and have new experiences -- but not as much about what skills and experiences you could offer them. Can you include some more details about the work you've done?

I hope this is helpful.

Sincerely,

Owen Grey

The first of the angels and the last of the devils

the last of the hell - I am not quite sure what you mean here. Do you mean that this devil is the only devil left in hell because the others have left? If yes, then "the last in hell" is how I would say it. Do you mean that this devil is not important or not impressive? If this one, then "the least of hell" is closer to what you mean but it doesn't sound natural. Maybe "the least important in hell" or 

all the energy of his tired heart - I am not quite sure what you mean here. In English we might say something like, "all the energy he could muster from his tired heart" or "all the energy his tired heart could produce".