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Writting an informal email. Hi Rodrigo, I´m very sorry for no written earlier, but I´ve been busy in my go back at home. First, I want give you thanks for you offered your home. It´s very nice and big for us. I love the garden with his flowers and swinning pool. Also, the beach was near, I think a hundred feet from yours home. My wife loves walk on the sand with brilliant sun in the sky. Cádiz is very nice at night. His restaurants, his pubs, his people. I hope go back next year becuse the experience have been wonderfull and we want repeat again. Secondly, I have to tell you my house is open for you. My small town is very nice too. It have two parks where the ours childrens can play. It have a summer cinema too. Finally, September is a special month, because my son start school and I have to prepare books, clothes, etc. Hope to see from you soon. Best whishes.

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First correction is great I will add my corrections in blue

Secondly, I have to tell you my house is open for you. My small town is very nice too. It havehas two parks where the ours childrens can play. It havehas a summer cinema too.
Finally, September is a special month, because my son starts school and I have to prepare books, clothes, etc.
Hope to see from you soon.  (should be either "hope to hear from you soon"  or  "hope to see you soon".

Best whishes wishes.
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Writting an informal email.

Hi Rodrigo,

I´m very sorry for no written not writing earlier, but I´ve been busy in my go back at home (sorry, but I do not understand what you mean with this sentence, so I can not correct it.  Maybe you mean - "I've been busy since returning home". First, I want give you thanks for you offered your home letting us borrow your home. It´s very nice and big for us. I love the garden with his its flowers and swimming pool. Also, the beach was near, I think a hundred feet from yours home. My wife loves walking on the sand with the  brilliant sun in the sky. Cádiz is very nice at night. His its restaurants, his its  pubs, his its  people. I hope to go back next year because the experience have has been wonderful and we want to repeat it again.
Secondly, I have to tell you my house is open for you. My small town is very nice too. It have has two parks where the ours childrens can play. It have has a summer cinema too.
Finally, September is a special month, because my son starts school and I have to prepare books, clothes, etc.
Hope to see from you soon.  (should be either "hope to hear from you soon"  or  "hope to see you soon".

Best whishes.

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