Writing test B2 exam

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in order to complain about your holiday cruise. I passed spent two weeks on what should have been an exclusive and fantastic cruise but it was not at all.

Firstly in your advertisement you wrote about an: "Interesting routes with lots to see" but in reality, the routes were too short and there was nothing to see, just an enormous quantity of sea water ( <- hahaha I like this). in the second place Secondly I am sorry to inform you that your cooking was very terrible, food was often not hot enough and the taste was not good. Thirdly there were not enough activities, we only could choose between the pool and the gym, I would have expected to find something else to do.

I suggest you to improve your service because, at the moment, it is not as good as you promised on your advertisement. I expect you to change the organized routes at once and then I would appreciate if you could pay more attention on to the quality of your food.

I am hoping that my complaint could be a good reason to improve. Thank you for taking this into consideration.
Yours faithfully,

Giulia

Reading and fully understand the books i read

Hi!

I'm used to reading a lot of technical books about software development and I understand what I'm reading by context. I don't understand every word of the books that I read but by the context I can understand it.

Yesterday started to do something new to me I started doing something new, I put a piece of paper near the next page to read with a pencil and a pencil next to the page I was reading and every word that I did not understand, I wrote it on the paper. Once I finished reading, I would try to find those words and write the definition and the traduction translation next to the word.

Hope this helps someone!

Thank you!

My self.

My name is wafa alshehhhi, I am 18 years old I was born in 2000,my birthday inis may 1,I am from RAK ,i live with my family ,i have 2 sisters and 4 brothers, I study in uaeu university ,my favorite color is yellow,I love many types of food,my favorite hobby is reading,I love having fun with my friends,i like to do party my friends,I like to go out with friends.،my hobbies are watching movies and cooking،I enjoy listening to music ,In my free time I speak with my best friend, I also like shopping , swimming , and playing games. I want to develop my language English,I want to develop my language,Also ,I live in London which is the most wonderful place in the world.

First correction is great I will add my corrections in blue

Secondly, I have to tell you my house is open for you. My small town is very nice too. It havehas two parks where the ours childrens can play. It havehas a summer cinema too.
Finally, September is a special month, because my son starts school and I have to prepare books, clothes, etc.
Hope to see from you soon.  (should be either "hope to hear from you soon"  or  "hope to see you soon".

Best whishes wishes.