Responding to Survey Questions
Hi all.
Thanks for reading my notebook. I am practicing writing a Responding letter now!
I really appreciate you helping me to correct it. Any suggestion is a good suggestion for me.
The wrtting I wrote is:
_______________________________________________________________________________
Both options have good advantages, and I can see why some of my colleagues might choose Option B. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option A is my preference.
For one thing, even though we cannot see the beautiful scene by taking a train, it is more efficient than taking a bus. We can save our travelling time and have more time to prepare for the meeting.
For another thing, it is important to have rehearsal time before the meeting. If we arrive in the other city at 9 PM, it means that we still have time to do the final discussion before we go to the next day’s meeting. As a result, we can show our best preparation in the meeting.
Finally, staying in a hotel overnight is more comfortable than sitting on a bus. We arrive before midnight then we can staying in a hotel overnight. If we did not get a good rest, we might not seem so energetic. We should let our clients feel our employee are friendly.
So as far as I am concerned, Option A is the better choice.
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Response to a Survey Question
Hi all.Thanks for reading my notebook. I am practicing writing a response essay now!
I really appreciate you helping me to correct it. Any suggestion is a good suggestion for me.
The wrtting I wrote is:
_______________________________________________________________________________
Both options have good advantages, and I can see why some of my colleagues might choose Option B. On the whole, however, there are several reasons why Option A is my preference.
For one thing, even though we cannot see the beautiful scenery from a train, it is more efficient than taking a bus. We can save our travelling time and have more time to prepare for the meeting.
For another thing, it is important to have preparation time before the meeting. If we arrive by 9 PM, it means that we would still have time to do some final discussion and rehearsal before we go to the next day’s meeting. As a result, we would be much better prepared.
Finally, staying in a hotel overnight is more comfortable than sitting on a bus. If we arrive before midnight then we could stay in a hotel overnight. If we did not get a good rest, we might not be energetic enough. [Better, "If we got a good night's rest, we would be much more energetic."] We should let our clients feel see how friendly our employees are friendly.
So as far as I am concerned, Option A is the better choice.
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