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第二个日记:人们为什么这么好? 我昨天开始用这个网站,可是人已经开始了帮我练习中文,还有人改正了我的第一个日记。我现在只要找到一些人为了跟他们用skype聊天。我觉得很棒!

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第二个日记→第二篇日记:人们为什么这么好?→为什么大家这么好
(* "大家"may be better than "人们", bcoz"大家"will leave the readers a sense of kindness)

我昨天刚开始用这个网站,可是人→大家已经开始了帮我练习中文了,还有人改正→修改了我的第一个→篇日记。我现在只要找到一些人为了跟他们用skype聊天。我觉得很棒!→ 现在我只要找到一些人,跟他们用skype聊天,我就会觉得很棒!

(* plz pay attention: in english, the phrase "the second dairy" is without any quantifiers, but in chinese , it needs. the word "个" you used doesn't match with "日记". We don't say "一个日记"or"第一个日记". We use "篇" as a quantifier to modify "日记", such as "一篇日记 (a diary)", "一篇文章 (an article)", "一篇作文 (a piece of writing)" ,"第二篇日记"and so on)
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 ni de zhongwen bucuo

 wo meiyou na me hao
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hi,my skype:stulip326
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friends are everywhere
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第二篇日记:大家为什么这么好?!

我昨天开始使用这个网站,就有人教我学中文,甚至有人修改了我的第一篇日记。现在我还找到一些可以与他们skype聊天的人,我感觉很棒!

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