A dragon's observation tower
We went on a wonderful trip at the last weekend. We wanted to reach the top of the Smrk mountain. It is the highest mountain in the Jizerske mountains on the Czech – Polisch border. It means „the spruce tree“. It was cold but sunny. We went up by a cable car. We don’t usually use the cable car. We like to achieve the top on foot. But we had lack of time. When we were going up, we were watching surroundings. We saw a little spa town, hills and forest from above. There was snow up. We had to be walking two or three kilometres until we reached the exact top of the Smrk mountain. My daughter had unsuitable shoos. She was frozen but brave. She likes long treks and she can resist a small discomfort. She is a scout. There stood an observation tower on the top of the mountain. It was built in 2003. The weather was foggy. The sky seemed like milk. The tower was beautiful. It was covered with ice scales. The surface of the tower was like a dragon’s skin. I never have seen this natural phenomenon. We were ricing upstairs. There were very big ice scales on the top of the tower. They seemed like bird’s wings. I will never forget that scene. I was amazed.
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A dragon observation tower (unless the dragon is doing the observing)
We went on a wonderful trip at the last weekend. We wanted to reach the top of the Smrk Mountain. It is the highest mountain in the Jizerske Mountain Range on the Czech-Polish border. It means „the spruce tree“. It was cold but sunny. We went up by a cable car. We don’t usually use the cable car. We like to reach the top on foot. But we had lack of insufficient time. While we were going up, we were (watching) observing the surroundings. We saw a little spa town, hills and a forest from above. There was snow up there. We had to be walking two or three kilometres until we reached the exact final top/summit of the Smrk Mountain. My daughter had unsuitable shoes. She was frozen but brave. She likes long treks and she can resist a small little discomfort. She is a scout/girl guide. There stood An observation tower stood on the top of the mountain. It was built in 2003. The weather was foggy. The sky seemed like milk. The tower was beautiful. It was covered with icy scales. The surface of the tower was like a dragon’s skin. I never have never seen this natural phenomenon before. We were ricing raced upstairs. There were very big icy scales on the top of the tower. They seemed like bird’s wings. I will never forget that scene. I was amazed.Well done.
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A Dragon's Observation Tower (This is a title, so the words ought to be capitalized.)
We went on a wonderful trip at the last weekend. We wanted to reach the top of the Smrk mountain. It is the highest mountain in the Jizerske mountains on the Czech – Polish border. It means „the spruce tree“. It was cold but sunny. We went up by a cable car. We , although we don’t usually use the cable car. We like to achieve reach the top on foot. But, but we had a lack of time. When we were going up, we were watching looking at the surroundings. We saw a little spa town, hills, and forest from above. There was snow up there. We had to be walking walk two or three kilometres until we reached the exact very top of the Smrk mountain. My daughter had unsuitable shoes. She was frozen but brave. She likes long treks and she can resist a withstand some small discomforts. She is a scout**. On the top of the mountain there stood an observation tower on the top of the mountain. It was built in 2003. The weather was foggy. The and the sky seemed like milk. The tower was beautiful. It was covered with ice scales. T and the surface of the tower was like a dragon’s skin. I never have seen this natural phenomenon. We were ricing upstairs**. There were very big ice scales on the top of the tower. They seemed like bird’s wings. I will never forget that scene. I was amazed.** She was a scout. - this can mean she was involved with an organized 'scout' group. More colloquially one could say She was a trooper. which would mean that she was strong and endured without complaint.
**We were ricing upstairs. - I think you meant 'We were rising upstairs'. It would be better said: We ascended the stairs or We went up the stairs.
Very nice writing, I liked your descriptions of the scene there. It inspires me to visit that area. -- Maria
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