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Saturday in Prague
Hi, everyone. I want to share with you, how was my my Saturday was. saturday. In the morning, I i was walk walked with my dog around my place where I live and it was great. It was realy hot, mabye about 20°C, and it is really nice good in prague in this season. Then i went to was in the gym, but i was without power, and elan so i appreciate it bad.** About 2 o' clock i was going went to my mother´s house to the barbecue. She lives in an apartment, with sharing shared garden. So, we (me, mum, and sister) started to grill a really good meal, it was great. Good meal, nice weather, and familiy together, there may be something better? Is there anything better? ** Oh, i almost forgot, my dog loooves water, so i was showering him in the garden, and he enjoyed it, mabye even more, then me. :)
I will be happy, when someone hleps me, to correct my text.
Hope you u enjoyed your Saturday at least as i am as much as I did. **In english, "I" is capitalized in writing.
** "but i was without power, and elan so i appreciate it bad." I am not sure I understand this. I think you are saying this: the gym was without power and ____ so I did not appreciate it. I do not know what elan would be, probably just a mistyped word.
** The phrases: "there may be something better?" and "at least as I am" are better expressed as I corrected. I understood your meaning, but those are hard phhases that would be difficult to find direct translation to, as they are more colloquial.
0 votedMay 31, 20180- Oblíbený Počasi Můj oblíbený počasi. Mnoho lidí mluví o počasí kdyby neměli jiný věci o mluvili. To je zajímavé protože každý den východ slunce po několik hodin a pak slunce západá a stát se noc. A potom 365 dny každý rok, znova a znova roky a další roky. Změny tohle obrazec jsou mály. Osoby znají všechní čtyři období, a každý rok taky jsou stejně čtyři roční období: léto, jaro, zima a podzim. Myslím že, mluvíme o počasí protože tohle je věci že všechny lidí zaží. Hledáme jenom jeden věc že to stejně abychom mluvili společné. Kdyby oni mluvili o počasí znali by měli stejně spoločené zkusenosti. Osob že nezná někdo jiný mohli by mluví o počasí spolu s kdokolím. Osoby chtěli by znát jiný osoby a potřebujou vztahy s jiným lidmi. Kdyby musel znali někdo jiný osob, potřebovali by najít společné životní zkušenosti nebo věci že má zajim o mluvili. Zatímco počasí je základné a není moc důležité, to je jako dveře do conversace. ‘Jaké bylo počasí tady?’ ‘Dneska je teplé (nebo studená, horká, má slunce, má prší...)’ ‘Jaké bylo počasí tam?’ Tohle otázky by mohli pomáhat lidí říkat něco, zastavili by trapný ticho. Možná kdybychom zapomněli naše obavy, abychom mluvili s neznámý osoby, mohli bychom objevovali více o oni a sami. A tak jsem Maria, a mám ráda když pršet a když pak sluníčko svítit skrz mraky. Jaké počasí jste máte moc rádi?April 20, 201830
At a Conference
I was at a conference on last Monday. The conference took two days.** The head topic was information technologies using used in a state and public administration. A lot of lectures were very interesting. Many of them focused on a the saving of personal data according to the GDPR. I liked them. I would be like have liked if the lectures were longer and more detailed. I heart loved a very usefull entry (session?) about file services. It was very beneficial for me. I was interested in this topic at in the last few weeks. I took much gained important informations there. What about were the disadvantages**? I had to wake up very early. I woke up at 3 o' clock a.m. The journey by a train was tiring. I was unhappy about a lot of plastic waste, that arose occurred at the place. I saw hundreds of plastic cups and hundreds of napkins there. I don’t like the unusefull useless waste. Clever heads minds should invent a more eco-friendly way to serve refreshments. What do you mean about throwaway plastic cups?** I was at a two day conference last Monday. (These first two sentences could be combined to read a little more naturally.)
** What about the disadvantages? (This question is perfectly understood, yet is it slightly formal and stiff in the way it reads. It could be changed to: "What was negative about it?" "What about it was unpleasant?" or "What about it was negative for me?"
0 votedApril 20, 20180My Favourite Book
I can not say, which book is my most favourite. I like a lot of books. I love a few of them. It’s difficult to compare some different types of literary genres. But I can say, which book I was reading read* the most times. It was the "Trycy’s Tiger" by W. Saroyan. I read it for the first time, when I was fifteen. My literature teacher led us instructed us to prepare short entries about read books that were read for our schoolmates. Monika, an eccentric and interesting girl, spoke about the "Tracy’s Tiger." She got me interested in this book. I asked her to lend me the book. She was agreed, but she wanted to return it it returned in the next morning. I started to read in the that evening. I was exciting. excited, and I finished to read reading it at the midnight. The book was so great! So, I began to read again from the first page. I was reading during the whole night this day. I managed it twice! Later, I read the book many times later. I bought a biligual book, too. I read it in English, but only once. Why was I so fascinated about it? Hard to say… It was a little crazy and a lot very wise. It was about a courage. Maybe I desired to have my own tiger, too. I believed, that all people would like to have their own tiger. The Life with a tiger would be easy and bright!The strike-through are words that would be better if they were the highlighted ones, the italics are suggestions for smoother reading. Nice writing!
*read depending on how this is pronounced it can be present continuous, future, or past tense with the exact same spelling. "I read books at night" is pronounced like 'reed' to be future/present continuous tense. "I read a book last month" it is pronounced 'red' like the color red. In written english, the tense is usually found by context, but in spoken English, this pronunciation is what helps someone understand the meaning. For clarity, it can be easier to use helping verbs (ie. I am reading, I was reading, I will read, I had read...) to explain the timing.
0 votedApril 20, 20180- Oblíbený počasí Můj oblibený počasi. Mnoho lidí mluví o počasí kdyby neměli jiný věci o mluvili. To je zajímavé protože každý den východ slunce po několik hodin a pak slunce západá a stát se noc. A potom 365 dny každý rok, znova a znova roky a další roky. Změny tohle obrazec jsou mály. Osoby znají všechní čtyři období, a každý rok taky jsou stejně čtyři roční období: léto, jaro, zima a podzim. Myslím že, mluvíme o počasí protože tohle je věci že všechny lidí zaží. Hledáme jenom jeden věc že to stejně abychom mluvili společné. Kdyby oni mluvili o počasí znali by měli stejně spoločené zkusenosti. Osob že nezná někdo jiný mohli by mluví o počasí spolu s kdokolím. Osoby chtěli by znát jiný osoby a potřebujou vztahy s jiným lidmi. Kdyby musel znali někdo jiný osob, potřebovali by najít společné životní zkušenosti nebo věci že má zajim o mluvili. Zatímco počasí je základné a není moc důležité, to je jako dveře do conversace. ‘Jaké bylo počasí tady?’ ‘Dneska je teplé (nebo studená, horká, má slunce, má prší...)’ ‘Jaké bylo počasí tam?’ Tohle otázky by mohli pomáhat lidí říkat něco, zastavili by trapný ticho. Možná kdybychom zapomněli naše obavy, abychom mluvili s neznámý osoby, mohli bychom objevovali více o oni a sami. A tak jsem Maria, a mám ráda když pršet a když pak sluníčko svítit skrz mraky. Jaké počasí jste máte moc rádi?
April 20, 201841 - Today we have it is 20th March 2018 and I am going to plan my summer holiday in summer. It is good time for planning because I need rest. I have never been in Norway. I like walking in the nature, so Norway is the best place for me this year. I would will travel there for fourteen days and see many places in Norway. I want to see Oslo, Lofoten, Bergen, Trondheim and Flam definitly. I would like to know local culture, food and people. I would like to walk at in the mountains and see beautiful nature. I would will have many photos from Norway. I have heard that Norway has very mountainous landscape, which I like it. I know that this country is very expensive so currently I have to save money for my holiday.0 votedApril 5, 20180
A Dragon's Observation Tower (This is a title, so the words ought to be capitalized.)
We went on a wonderful trip at the last weekend. We wanted to reach the top of the Smrk mountain. It is the highest mountain in the Jizerske mountains on the Czech – Polish border. It means „the spruce tree“. It was cold but sunny. We went up by a cable car. We , although we don’t usually use the cable car. We like to achieve reach the top on foot. But, but we had a lack of time. When we were going up, we were watching looking at the surroundings. We saw a little spa town, hills, and forest from above. There was snow up there. We had to be walking walk two or three kilometres until we reached the exact very top of the Smrk mountain. My daughter had unsuitable shoes. She was frozen but brave. She likes long treks and she can resist a withstand some small discomforts. She is a scout**. On the top of the mountain there stood an observation tower on the top of the mountain. It was built in 2003. The weather was foggy. The and the sky seemed like milk. The tower was beautiful. It was covered with ice scales. T and the surface of the tower was like a dragon’s skin. I never have seen this natural phenomenon. We were ricing upstairs**. There were very big ice scales on the top of the tower. They seemed like bird’s wings. I will never forget that scene. I was amazed.** She was a scout. - this can mean she was involved with an organized 'scout' group. More colloquially one could say She was a trooper. which would mean that she was strong and endured without complaint.
**We were ricing upstairs. - I think you meant 'We were rising upstairs'. It would be better said: We ascended the stairs or We went up the stairs.
Very nice writing, I liked your descriptions of the scene there. It inspires me to visit that area. -- Maria
0 votedApril 4, 20181My Experience with English Language (Since this is a title, these words ought to be capitalized.)
I chose this topic because I have learned studied this language for 2 years and I spend most of my time.This is a fragment and unclear it could be written as follows: and I spend most of my time learning English.
English has always was been my nightmare because I studied German on primary school and when I went to high school. I must have studied with classmates who were at a higher level then me and I never gained on reached the same level. I created developed (a few words could be used here: grew resistant, developed resistance, built resistance) resistance to English. I tried to study English many times but always gave up it it up. My last experience is was 2 years ago when I started on an English course and this that course took 1 year. After this that course, I started to study English conversation with Czech and native speakers. English began to entertain interest me and I felt better. Now I have been studying English intensively and I'm happy.You communicated your idea well! Great job at it. - Maria
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