Christmas Time
I really enjoy the Christmas Time. I like to decorate the home with the Christmas things, I like the xmas tree, the "Belen", the lights, the music, the weather, the ambient, the presents, the food. I like to keep the xmas traditions and show them to my daughter.
I like to spend time with my familiy, I like to read my daughter's letters to "Santa Claus" and to "Magic Kings" and know her wishes.
I wish you a joly Christmas, enjoy it, please think about how be a better person, help to another people, it is the best way to be happy. God bless you.
Merry Christmas!!!!
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Christmas Time
I really enjoy the Christmas time. I like to decorate the home with the Christmas things, the Christmas tree, the "Belen", the lights, the music, the weather, the ambiance, the presents and the food. I like to keep the Christmas traditions and show them to my daughter.I like to spend time with my familiy. I like to read my daughter's letters to "Santa Claus" and to " The Three Kings" and know her wishes.
I wish you a jolly Christmas. Enjoy it. Pplease think about how to be a better person and a help to another people. It is the best way to be happy. God bless you.
Merry Christmas!!!!
Muy bien, Ignacio, y feliz Navidad a ti también. Comentarios:
Aunque se usa mucho "Xmas" para anuncios, etc. En mi opinión, es mejor escribir "Christmas" en un narrativo o ensayo.
La traducción de "Los Reyes Magos" no es la misma cosa en inglés. Nosotros nunca decimos "magos" (Magicians). Normalmente, referimos a esos reyes solamente como "Los Tres Reyes" o "The Three Kings".
Estilísticamente, quisiera sugerir que no repitas el pronombre "I" siempre. Es un poco monótono y tu párrafo se mejoraría con un cambio. Ejemplo:
"I really enjoy Christmas time. Decorating the home with Christmas things is fun. I enjoy the Christmas tree, the 'Belén', etc."
Supongo que "the Belén" es la escena del establo con todos alrededor del niño Jesús, ¿verdad? En inglés, sería más común llamarlo "the creche" o "the manger"
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Christmas Time
I really enjoy the Christmas time. I like to decorate the home with the Christmas-themed things objects, (<--"Thing" in English sounds terrible when written. It's best to avoid it.) I like the Christmas (<--"X-mas" is highly informal and should only be written in informal situations.) tree, the "Belen," the lights, the music, the weather, the ambience, the presents, and the food. I like to keep the Christmas traditions and show them to my daughter.
I like to spend time with my family, I like to (<--These words are not necessary. We try to condense our writing when we can.) read my daughter's letters to "Santa Claus" and to "Magic Kings," and know her wishes.
I wish you a jolly Christmas. Enjoy it! Please think about how to be a better person and help to another people; it is the best way to be happy. God bless you.
Merry Christmas!!!!
Muy bien, Ignacio. Feliz Navidad también =)
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