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my pets I keep a pair of Harlequin shrimp in my water tank. they eats starfish . So I must keep starfish too. The shrimp wields his hands when he is excited by something. It's cause of geting starfish , seeing shadows of my hands , and so on. If they gets enough nutrition , they has cast off their skin. I have never seen the scene . I can see only their skin in my water tank. The shrimp live in the tropical sea. So my water tank is kept in 26℃. I have seen them first time at the Enosima aquarium . They has beautiful forelegs and small body . I thought They were very cute ! A few years later , In tropical fish shop ,I met again them. I was crazy about them and I started keeping them. I have keeping them for two months. 日本ではフリソデエビと呼ばれています。 前足が着物のフリソデのように大きいからです。 とてもきれいなエビです。

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We had it for a few years (at least five, but I don't know how long). I don't remember exactly what happened to the turtle, but I think my dad gave it to someone. We had a pet store for a little while, and he started to keep the turtle at the store. It was around the time I was starting college. I was too busy with that, and I don't really remember what happened.
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to ofaaron (・ω・) Thank you fou giving comment ! Your dad should loves fishes,my father too. My father particularly loves cats . He fed stray cats .　 Hou long was your turtle lived??　 I think a big turtle lives very long.(　ﾟдﾟ)　
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Very interesting. Growing up, my dad always had many fish tanks in our house. We normally just had fresh water fish in them though. Although, one time we did have a fairly large turtle. We never kept shrimp though, so it is an animal I haven't seen very much of. They look very interesting though.
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My Pets

I keep a pair of Harlequin shrimps in my water tank.
They eats starfish .
So I must keep starfish too.

The shrimp wields his hands its claws when he is excited by something.
It's cause of geting Grabbing starfish , seeing shadows of my hands  and so on.

If they gets enough nutrition , they has cast off their skin. (this is called moulting)
I have never seen the scene . them moult.
I can see saw only their skin in my the water tank.

The shrimps live in the tropical seas.
So my water tank is kept in at 26℃.

I have seen them The first time I saw them was at the Enosima aquarium .
They has have beautiful forelegs and a small body .
I thought They were very cute !
A few years later , In tropical fish shop ,I met saw again them.
I was crazy about them and I started keeping them as pets.

I have been  keeping them for two months.


日本ではフリソデエビと呼ばれています。
前足が着物のフリソデのように大きいからです。
とてもきれいなエビです。
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my pets

I keep a pair of Harlequin shrimp in my water tank aquarium.
They eats starfish. So I must keep starfish too.

The shrimp wields his hands when he is excited by something like getting a starfish, seeing shadows of my hands and so on. << Probably should be in plural form since you have two shrimp

If they gets enough nutrition , they has cast off their skin.
I have never seen this happen. I can usually see only their skin in my water tank.

Shrimp live in the tropical sea. << generally speaking 
So the temperature of my water tank is kept at 26℃.

I saw them for the first time at the Enosima aquarium .
They had beautiful forelegs and a small body .
I thought they were very cute !
A few years later, in a tropical fish shop, I met them again . << flip it
I was crazy about them and I started keeping them as pets.

I have been keeping them for two months now.


日本ではフリソデエビと呼ばれています。
前足が着物のフリソデのように大きいからです。
とてもきれいなエビです。

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Guide: Red=訂正|Blue=推敲|Yellow=わかり難い|Green=意見

Furisode...可愛くないです。怖いです。T_T
Sea creatures are scary to me...

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