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The Meaning of Adversity The theme of second unit of our Chinese textbook for this semester is "confronting the adversity", and there is a acticle named "One Prospers in Worries and Hardships, and Perishes in Ease and Comfort" written in classical Chinese by Mencius, a philosopher who lived in over 2000 years ago, was regarded as the second sage after the Confucius in Chinese traditional culture. I learned this very article many years ago and still can recite it without thinking. In this article, Mencius began with several famous examples sharing a common plot that a humble person was promoted as a person of power from a unpromising environment, for instance, a shepherd named Bailixi was appointed as a prime minister of Qin State in the slave market. After that ,Mencius concluded that a person destined to make great achievement must suffer great pains both physically and mentally before he succeed, and the adversity is unavoiable.That is, it is the adversity those people had gone through that helped them to fulfill those formidable task by stimulating their spirit, toughening their nature and enhancing their ability.

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The Meaning of Adversity

The theme of the second unit of our Chinese textbook for this semester is "Confronting the Adversity," and there is an article named "One Prospers in Worries and Hardships, and Perishes in Ease and Comfort" written in classical Chinese by Mencius, a philosopher who lived in over 2000 years ago and who was regarded as the second sage after the Confucius in Chinese traditional culture.
I read (or memorized?) this very article many years ago and still can recite it from memory. In this article, Mencius began with several famous stories sharing a common plot that a humble person was promoted to a position of power from a unpromising environment. For instance, a shepherd named Bailixi was appointed as a Prime Minister of Qin State in the slave market. After that, Mencius concluded that a person destined to achieve greatness must suffer great pains both physically and mentally before he succeeds, and that adversity is unavoidable.That is, it is the adversity people go through that helps them complete formidable tasks. Adversity stimulates their spirit, toughens their nature and enhances their ability.

*The only reason I suggested splitting the last sentence up is because of the placement of the phrase "by stimulating their spirit...enhancing their ability." The placement makes it sound like they complete their tasks by stimulating their spirit...enhancing their ability rather than adversity helps people complete their tasks because adversity puts people through x, y and z trials/tribulations. But the grammar was correct otherwise:)

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The Meaning of Adversity

The theme of the second unit of in our Chinese textbook for this semester is "confronting the adversity", and there is an article named titled "One Prospers in Worries and Hardships, and Perishes in Ease and Comfort" written in classical Chinese by Mencius, a philosopher who lived in over 2000 years ago and was regarded as the second sage after the Confucius in Chinese traditional culture. (<--这句子比较长,最好分成两个句子写。)

I learned from this very article many years ago and still can recite it without thinking. In this article, Mencius began with several famous examples sharing that shared a common plot that in which a humble person was promoted as a person of power from an unpromising environment (for instance, a shepherd named Bailixi was appointed as a prime minister of the Qin State in the slave market). After that, Mencius concluded that a person destined to make great achievement achieve greatness (<--这听上去更自然。) must suffer great pains both physically and mentally before he/she can succeed, and the this adversity is unavoidable.That is, It is the adversity that those these people had gone through that helped them to fulfill those their formidable tasks by stimulating their spirit, toughening their natures, and enhancing their abilities.

写得不错,Linda!希望我的修改能帮你忙。有问题请别怕问 =)

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