One day I want to go abroad some day. I have been to Hawaii once but I have no memory about my first trip. So I should study English hard in order to enjoy my second trip.

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Emily

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One day

I want to go abroad some day.
I have been to Hawaii once but I have no memory about of my first trip.

[The phrase is a memory of something]

So I should study English hard in order to enjoy my second trip.

[Well done nice work. Maybe add another sentence or two next time. Be brave.]

One day

I want to go abroad some day.

I have been to Hawaii once, but I have no memory about my first trip.
So Thus, (<--Starting a sentence with "so" doesn't sound good, even though it's grammatically correct.) I should study English hard in order to enjoy my second trip.

Good luck, Emily! =)

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