I reaaly appreciate correction:) topic" When the ambition ends, happiness begin"
It is undeniably true that the human being aim to different targets along/over? the life according to their values. It could be argue that the ambition is a obstacle to have a fulfilled life. However, I believe that no matter what the desire is as long as we manage that through a positive attitude.
Power, money, and material possesions are prevalently linked to a negative concept of ambition and, consequently, with unhappiness. This is due to the patters that some people show to obtain those. To illustrate, becoming a top manager with high income may involve to spend little time with the family and friends which are a crucial source of happiness. Therefore, this kind of ambition could be a barrier to be happy.
Nevertheless, the ambition may lead favourable impacts on our lives. This is because desires such as having a career, promoting to a better job position or maintaining a powerful and esvelte body, promote people to be motivated, engaged and enthusiastic. Perform successfully in those issues would make anybody, without doubt, to be proud and satisfied with themself. The key, therefore, is a balance between the desire of achieving something and not being obsessed in that approach.
To sum up, despite some people consider ambition as a negative value, I firmly believe that this may causes benefits in human being such us have reasons to be active and motivated.
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I reaaly appreciate correction:) topic" When the ambition ends, happiness begins"
It is undeniably true that the human being humans aim to different targets along/over? the in/during our lives life according to their our values. It could be argued that the beign too ambitious/ambition is an obstacle to have a fulfilled life. However, I believe that no it does not matter what the desire is as long as we manage that through a positive attitude.Power, money, and material possesions are prevalently/predominantly linked to a negative concept of ambition and, consequently, with unhappiness. This is due to the behaviour patterns that some people show to obtain those. To illustrate, becoming a top manager with a high income may involve to spend little time with the family and friends which are a crucial source of happiness. Therefore, this kind of ambition could be a barrier to lead a be happy life.
Nevertheless, the ambition may lead have a favourable impacts on our lives. This is because desires such as having a career (degree?), promoting being promoted to a better job position or maintaining a powerful and esvelte slender body, promote encourage people to be motivated, engaged and enthusiastic. Performing successfully in those issues would make anybody, without doubt, to be proud and satisfied with themself themselves. The key, therefore, is to find a balance between the desire of achieving something and not being obsessed in that approach.
To sum up, despite the fact that some people consider regard ambition as a negative value/trait, I firmly believe that this may causes benefits in human beings such us have giving us reasons to be active and motivated.
REMEMBER!! We don’t use the when we refer in general to something abstract or uncountable ; )
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I really appreciate correction:) topic "When ambition ends, happiness begins"
It is undeniably true that one's targets in life depend on one's values. It could be argued that ambition is an obstacle to a fulfilled life. However, I believe that it matters not what our desire is, as long as we manage our desire through a positive attitude.Power and wealth are mostly linked to a negative concept of ambition and, consequently, with unhappiness. This is due to the things that some people do to obtain them. To illustrate, becoming a top manager with high income may involve spending little time with family and friends which are a crucial source of happiness. Therefore, this kind of ambition could be a barrier to be happy.
Nevertheless, ambition may lead to good things in our lives. This is because desires such as having a career, promoting to a better job position or maintaining a powerful and svelte body, drive people to be motivated, engaged and enthusiastic. Performing successfully in those issues would make anybody, without doubt, be proud and satisfied with themselves. The key, therefore, is a balance between the desire of achieving something and not being obsessed with it.
To sum up, although some consider ambition as a negative thing, I firmly believe that it may benefit us by keeping us active and making us motivated.
Very well written!
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