IELTS Writing task 1:average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four countries from 1967 to 2007
The graph below show average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrate the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four countries from 1967 to 2007.
To be more exact, two countries, Italy and Portugal share the similar general trend that is an increasing rise. United Kingdom have the decreasing trend, and Sweden experienced ups and downs over the years.
For countries with increasing trend, ITALY begins at upper than 4 metric tonnes in 1967 to lower than 8 metric tonnes in 2007, it has a relative stable grow between the period from 1977 to 1997. Portugal has rapidly soaring number from approximately 1 metric tonnes in 1967 to upper than 5 metric tonnes in 2007, and level off from 1997 to 2007.
UNITED KINGDOM have a smoothly dropping trend from lower than 11 metric tonnes in 1967 to approximately 9 metric tonnes in 2007. And the last country which occupy the fluctuating trend over the years, sharply go up from lower than 9 metric tonnes until more than 10 metric tonnes in 1977, after its highest point, a consistently dipping appear until 7 metric tonnes in 1987, and then there is a relative slowly dropping trend to the end of upper than 5 metric tonnes in 2007 .
In conclusion, the graph have been described with its main information.
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IELTS Writing task 1:average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four countries from 1967 to 2007
The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The line chart illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four countries (not a grammar error, but I believe you should specify which ones right from the beginning) from 1967 to 2007.
To be more exact, two countries, Italy and Portugal, share the similar general trend that is an increasing rise. The United Kingdom has a decreasing trend, and Sweden experienced ups and downs over the years.
For countries with an increasing trend, Italy (don't write it in all capital letters) begins at more than 4 metric tonnes in 1967 to less than 8 metric tonnes in 2007, it has a relatively stable growth ("to grow" is a verb, "growth" is the act of growing) between the period from 1977 to 1997. Portugal has rapidly soaring number from approximately 1 metric tonnes in 1967 to more than 5 metric tonnes in 2007, and level off (what were you trying to say?) from 1997 to 2007.
The United Kingdom has a smoothly dropping trend from less than 11 metric tonnes in 1967 to approximately 9 metric tonnes in 2007. And the last country which occupies the fluctuating trend over the years, sharply going up from less than 9 metric tonnes to more than 10 metric tonnes in 1977, after its highest point, a consistently dipping appear until 7 metric tonnes (what were you trying to say?) in 1987, and then there is a relatively slowly dropping trend to the end (???) of more than 5 metric tonnes in 2007 .
In conclusion, the graph has been described with its main information. (formally speaking, I must warn you this is not, I believe, considered a conclusion)
Be really careful with "more" and "less" (which are followed by "than", unlike "upper" and "lower"), as well as third persons (have -> has, show -> shows, etc.), next time.
Also, I'm afraid could not understand some sentences at all, so I couldn't help you there. I hope somebody will be able to help you in that regard.
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