Singing with the soul
I always dreamed working with music, but I never really committed. I'm a lazy person with some talent. And the talent disrupted me a little, because it made me think I didn't have to fight for it. Things always came on an easy way.
But now, I realize that I need to run after the time I've lost. There are so many things to learn and improve. I just wanna be the best singer and actress I can be.
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Singing with the soul
I always dreamed of working with music, but I never really committed myself. I'm a talented but lazy person with some talent. And the talent disrupted me a little, because it made me think I didn't have to fight for it. Things always came on in an easy way.But now, I realize that I need to run move with speed after because of the time I've lost. There are is so many things much to learn and improve. I just wanna be the best singer and actress I can be.
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Singing with the soul
I always dreamed of working with music, but I never really committed. I'm a lazy person with some talent. The talent disrupted me a little, because it made me think I didn't have to fight for it. (Generally speaking, it's best not to start a sentence with "and" if you can avoid it) Things always came easily. (I changed this just to make it flow a little better).But now, I realize that I need to run after the time I've lost. There are so many things to learn and improve. I just wanna (in formal writing you'd have to use "want to" instead of "wanna" but it's a well know abbreviation) be the best singer and actress I can be.
Thank you for reading and correcting!
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Singing with the soul
I always dreamed of working with music, but I never really committed. I'm a lazy person with some talent. (deleted the "and" because it is not the proper way to start a sentence) The talent disrupted me a little, because it made me think I didn't have to fight for it. Things always came on in an easy way.But now, I realize that I need to run after the time I've lost. There are so many things to learn and improve. I just want to (changing this can maintain the formal appearance of the writing) be the best singer and actress I can be.
Thank you for reading and correcting!
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