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Kittens Aww My heart is pounding! Because my friend found 4 kittens, and she is looking for a person to become an owner. I told my mother about the kittens. She will talk with my father at this night. I hope they decide to have this kitten.

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Kittens

Aww, my heart is pounding because my friend found four kittens, and she is looking for a person to become an their owner.

I told my mother about the kittens.
She will talk with my father at this tonight.
I hope they decide to have this keep these kittens.

Meow! =)

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To everyone Thank you for your corrections! I'll up photo of the kittens on next notebook. (^。^)
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When you say "My heart is pounding!" I think you should say "I am excited!" I believe that is like 「ドキドキしている」in Japanese.
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Meow
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or "to take a kitten" or "to adopt a kitten" 猫子の写真を投稿してください。

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