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April 9th. I went a park to see cherry blossoms with my husband. Cherry blossoms were blooming from last week here in Tokyo. But last weekends it was too cold to go seeing it. This Saturday and Sunday were rainy and windy. But we wanted to see it today,so after stopping rain, went to a park. Although it was dark around there and some of blossoms were falling with rain and wind we enjoyed them. I heard there were a lot of foreign tourists in famous park like the imperial palace park.

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April 9th.

I went to the park to see cherry blossoms with my husband. Cherry blossoms were blooming from since last week here in Tokyo,
but last weekends it was too cold to go and seeing it. This Saturday and Sunday were both rainy and windy, but despite that, we wanted to see it today, so after the rain stopped, went to a park.
Although it was dark around there and some of blossoms were falling with rain and wind, we enjoyed seeing them.
I heard there were a lot of foreign tourists in famous parks like the imperial palace park.


お花見ですね~羨ましいな~


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April 9th.

I went to a park to see cherry blossoms with my husband. Cherry blossoms were blooming from since last week here in Tokyo.
Bbut last weekends it was too cold to go see themseeing it. This Saturday and Sunday were rainy and windy. But we wanted to see it them today,so after it stopped rainingstopping rain, we went to athe park.
Although it was dark around there and some of blossoms were falling with the rain and wind, we enjoyed them.
I heard there were a lot of foreign tourists in famous parks like the iImperial pPalace park.

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