I'm listening to Austin Mahone's song! Hello! I'm Mako. This is my first time I use italki. Recently I hooked on listening to 'Dirty Work' of 'Austin Mahone' cause a comedian in Japan uses this song i

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I'm listening to Austin Mahone's song! Hello! I'm Mako. This is my first time I use italki. Recently I hooked on listening to 'Dirty Work' of 'Austin Mahone' cause a comedian in Japan uses this song in her material!! Now I noticed Austin and this music video is so hot;)

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I'm listening to Austin Mahone's song!

Hello! I'm Mako.
This is the first time I use italki.
Recently I hooked on listening to 'Dirty Work' from 'Austin Mahone' cause a comedian in Japan uses it in one of her show!!
Now I've noticed Austin from this music video is so hot;) (I would rather say "Now I've noticed that the singer is so hot ;)")

Not sure about the "Recently I hooked on listening to". Maybe a native speaker can help you better than I do :)

I'm listening to Austin Mahone's song!

Hello! I'm Mako.
This is my first time I using italki.
Recently, I got hooked on listening to 'Dirty Work' of by 'Austin Mahone' because a comedian in Japan uses this song in her material!!

Now I have noticed that Austin and this music video is are so hot ;)

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Notes: You normally wouldn't describe a music video as hot, so maybe try some different adjectives, such as:

cool, amazing, awesome, incredible, etc.

Hope I was of some help (:

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