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    Travelling to NY

    I'm going to go to NY next month.
    I'm very anxious about this travelling because I go am going abroad for the first time.
    If there is a man who knows NY's good places in NY, tell me about them.
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    February 16, 2017
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    'Pourquoi j'apprends le français?' "Pourquoi j'apprends le français?" On me pose souvent cette question. 'Imagine ça,' je pense, 'imagine recontrer quelqu'un. Recontrer quelqu'un qui est parfait pour vous. Mais, ils ne parlent pas Anglais. Vous les deux trés bien, comme si vous étiez fait pour l'autre. Mais, vous ne pouvez pas leur parler, car ils parlent français. Je veux etre capable de briser cette barriére. Je veux avoir plus d'opportunités. Je veux recontrer nouvelles personnes. Je veux aller plus adventures. Je veux vivre.' "Ahahaha juste parce que pourquoi pas?" je parle. (( this is a speech for my French class. Please help me correct and perfect it! ))
    February 15, 2017
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    City of Dreams

    The City of Dreams is small and there is always something new to do. It is a beautifull beautiful place and the people are always very friendly. Things seams seem to be working well and it almost does not have any problems like stealing, violence and or corruption. The mayor is doing a great job and everyone is satisfield satisfied with that. Education, health and public security are priorities.

    On the weekends, there are many tourists from another other cities. The City of dreams is a very good place to have fun, relax and make friends. There is a clean river, an amazing square and a delicious homemade meals. And the best thing of all: all of it is for a very affordable price/prices are quite affordable. Music is very popular here, and there are several kinds: country, rock and samba among others.

    If you are planning to do take a vacation or travel, the City of Dreams is the ideal place to go. It is surely worthy worth it. You will enjoy it a lot. We are waiting awaiting your visit.


    [ Hope this helps (: ] 

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    January 24, 2017
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    I'm listening to Austin Mahone's song!

    Hello! I'm Mako.
    This is my first time I using italki.
    Recently, I got hooked on listening to 'Dirty Work' of by 'Austin Mahone' because a comedian in Japan uses this song in her material!!

    Now I have noticed that Austin and this music video is are so hot ;)

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    Notes: You normally wouldn't describe a music video as hot, so maybe try some different adjectives, such as:

    cool, amazing, awesome, incredible, etc.

    Hope I was of some help (:

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    January 24, 2017
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