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Photo hunting On the last weekend my husband and me came to the Park of Petergof. We wanted to give to squirrels some nuts and to take some photos with them. The weather was quiet and snowy. We took a bread, nuts and went out from our car. In front of the park we saw some footprints of squirrels! Yes! We thought that the photo hunting would be sucсessful! We were looking for them about three hours. But we saw only their footsteps everywere near firs. But I don't regret about this walk. It was in the beautiful park with snowy trees. It was snowing and it created magic athmosphere around us. We took some photos of ourself, gave some bread to little yellow birds - tomtits. And I was happy to take some photo of them! Also I like red birds - bullfinches. Unfortunately we didn't met them. But I think, my photo hunting nevertheless was successful!

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Photo hunting

On the last Last weekend my husband and me I went came to the Petergof Park of Petergof. We wanted to give to the ("the" because we're talking about specific squirrels i.e. those in the park) squirrels some nuts and to take some photos with/of them. The weather was quiet and snowy. We took picked up/grabbed a loaf of bread/some bread, and nuts and went out from our left the car. In front of the park we saw some squirrel footprints of squirrels! Yes! We thought that the photo hunting would be sucсessful!
We were looking looked for them about for three hours. But we saw only their footsteps everywere near firs.
But I don't regret about this the walk. It was in the beautiful park with snowy snow-covered trees. It was snowing and it created a magical athmosphere atmosphere around us. We took some photos of ourself ourselves, gave some bread to the little yellow birds - tomtits Tomtits. And I was happy to take some photos of them! Also , I like red birds - bullfinches Bullfinches. Unfortunately we didn't met see them. But I think, my photo hunting nevertheless was nevertheless successful!


Well done Elena! I have a beautiful picture of the park in my head now!

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Photo hunting

Last weekend my husband and I went to the Park of Petergof. We wanted to give the squirrels some nuts and to take some (not a grammatical error, just better writing.) photos with them. The weather was quiet and snowy. We took a bread, nuts and left our car. In front of the park we saw some footprints of squirrels! Yes! We thought that the photo hunting would be successful.
We looked for them for about three hours. But we saw only their footsteps everywhere near the firs.
But I don't regret taking this walk. It was in the beautiful park with snowy trees. It was snowing and it created a magic atmosphere around us. We took some photos of ourselves, and gave some bread to little yellow birds - tomtits. And I was happy to take some photos of them!  I also like the red birds - bullfinches. Unfortunately we didn't see them. But I think my photo hunting nevertheless  (use either but or nevertheless at the beginning, not both) was successful!

(Hope that helps! Your story makes me jealous- I live in Texas in the USA and we haven't had any snow this year. =D ) 

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