cover letter Hello, here is part of my cover letter. Could you please correct me I’m currently a French Au pair in London, in Welwyn garden city since April 2016. Consequently I have a great deal of

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cover letter Hello, here is part of my cover letter. Could you please correct me I’m currently a French Au pair in London, in Welwyn garden city since April 2016. Consequently I have a great deal of free time and I would like to turn to good account my time to enrich my personal experience as well as to acquire news skills. Loving helping and teaching your add have immediately caught my interest. I have already had the opportiny to teaching during homework assitance sessions in associations and private lessons. Therefore, it will be for me very interesting to try my hand at a new type of support by teaching my native language to other people. Although my profil doesn’t correspond exactly with yours expectations. I would be grateful if you would consider my application because I really whishing to make a useful contribution in your firm. Being a person hard-working, patient, organized and kind, I’m sure I will be able to carry out the job or anyone that fits me better.

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cover letter

Hello, here is part of my cover letter. Could you please correct me?

I’m currently a French Au pair from London, but in Welwyn garden city since April 2016. Consequently I have a great deal of free time and I would like to turn it to good account to enrich my personal experience as well as to acquire new skills. Loving helping and teaching your advert immediately caught my interest.

I have already had the opportunity to teach, assisting in homeworks in associations, and giving private lessons. Therefore, it will be very enjoyable and interesting for me to teach my native language to other people.

Although my profile does not correspond exactly with your expectations, I would be grateful if you would consider my application because I really wish to make a useful contribution to your firm.

Being hard-working, patient, organized and kind, I feel sure I shall be able to carry out the job in a professional and efficient and friendly manner. Thank you for reading.

Very well written! You're hired! (not fired)

Hello,

I tried my best to correct your cover letter and help it flow. I am guessing you are replying to an Ad via e-mail but it would be helpful if you mentioned the position you are applying for the and the name of the firm. I was not sure of the position you are applying for so I could only change/ add so much. In the 2nd paragraph I was not sure about the type of teaching you have done before, so you may need to change my corrections. In the 3rd paragraph I do not think you should mention that your "profile is not what they are looking for", you may want to take that out and focus on your qualifications, abilities and skills that do fit what they are looking for.

Hope it helps and good luck!

Your ad (Put name of position) caught my interest because I love helping and teaching. I am currently working as a French Au pair in London and have been in Welwyn Garden City since April 2016. Consequently. I am interested in the position because I hope to enrich my personal experiences and acquire new skills during my free time. I have a great deal of free time and I would like to turn to good account my time to enrich my personal experience as well as to acquire news skills.  Loving helping and teaching your add have immediately caught my interest.

I have already had the opportiny to I have experience teaching private lesson and providing homework tutoring in ( INSERT NATIVE LANGUAGE).  teaching during homework assitance sessions in associations and private lessons. Therefore, it will be for me very interesting for me to try my hand at a new way to teach type of support by teaching my native language to others. people.

Although my profile (experience) does not correspond exactly perfectly with your requirements. with yours expectations, I would be very grateful if you consider my application. because I really whishing truly wish to make a useful contribution in your firm.  I am hard-working, patient, organized and kind. I am confident in my abilities and truly believe I will be a strong contribution to your firm. I’m sure I will be able to carry out the job or anyone that fits me better.

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