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Hello,
I tried my best to correct your cover letter and help it flow. I am guessing you are replying to an Ad via e-mail but it would be helpful if you mentioned the position you are applying for the and the name of the firm. I was not sure of the position you are applying for so I could only change/ add so much. In the 2nd paragraph I was not sure about the type of teaching you have done before, so you may need to change my corrections. In the 3rd paragraph I do not think you should mention that your "profile is not what they are looking for", you may want to take that out and focus on your qualifications, abilities and skills that do fit what they are looking for.
Hope it helps and good luck!
Your ad (Put name of position) caught my interest because I love helping and teaching. I am currently working as a French Au pair in London and have been in Welwyn Garden City since April 2016. Consequently. I am interested in the position because I hope to enrich my personal experiences and acquire new skills during my free time. I have a great deal of free time and I would like to turn to good account my time to enrich my personal experience as well as to acquire news skills. Loving helping and teaching your add have immediately caught my interest.
I have already had the opportiny to I have experience teaching private lesson and providing homework tutoring in ( INSERT NATIVE LANGUAGE). teaching during homework assitance sessions in associations and private lessons. Therefore, it will be for me very interesting for me to try my hand at a new way to teach type of support by teaching my native language to others. people.
Although my profile (experience) does not correspond exactly perfectly with your requirements. with yours expectations, I would be very grateful if you consider my application. because I really whishing truly wish to make a useful contribution in your firm. I am hard-working, patient, organized and kind. I am confident in my abilities and truly believe I will be a strong contribution to your firm. I’m sure I will be able to carry out the job or anyone that fits me better.0 votedJanuary 8, 20171Not sure if this answers your question, but I usually say to friends, "Hey, wanna grab a coffee?"
To a co-worker or in a more formal setting- " Would you like grab a coffee after lunch/ later on/ tomorrow morning?"
Slang for coffee in America is "a cup of joe" pronounced "cup-pa-joe". Older people may use this slang. "Do you want a cup of joe?"
I live in California so the phrase can be region & age based.
Yes, you do "ask someone" or "invite them to" coffee. "Did you ask her to coffee?"/ "Did you invite her to coffee on Thursday?"
0 votedJanuary 4, 20171Poetry
Hey guys, I am now working on to improve my English which seems to be stucked in one place. I would be glad appreciative if you point out any mistakes I made in my poem or any mistakes I made in this note. thanks.
I am half alive, looking in to depth of the ocean.
Take me with the waves, cary with your strong force.
I am just a weak woman.
There isn't any more words I wanna say to this world.
I feel like a ghost.
Don't take me wrong.
I am not depressed
Neither lost,
I just can not live apart from you anymore,
I want to become one,
With the sun,
With the flower,
With the air,
I want to became one with you.
When I listen to a melody,
When I see a beautiful art,
When I love,
There is a gap,
My body breathes,
But my soul is dead,
Take me to the depth of your heart.
From where the melody comes,
From where the light shine.
Where everything begins.Nice poem! When writing poetry the author has "poetic" freedom so you do not always have to follow correct grammar rules or punctuation etc. Like my art teachers used to tell us "there is no wrong way in art". The poet may choose to not capitalize any letters expect a certain word to make it more powerful. I made a few small changes to your poem that I think helps complete the thought and flow better.
0 votedJanuary 4, 20171- Hello, Coworker is someone you work with. Colleague can be used for someone you work with, study on the same course with, or someone who works in the same field/job as you that you know on a professional level. Peer is someone you are equal to; either in the work place or at school Hope that answers your questions,0 votedOctober 30, 20161
My English Skills.
Hi everyone my name is Ahmed. I am from Somalia. I now live in Sudan studying accounting at university. I can speak Somali, Arabic, and I can also speak English. However, my listening skills are better than my speaking skills as I watch a lot of movies and television shows. I would like to practice my speaking but I do not have a native English speaking partner to do this with.
I would appreciate any advice and corrections to this paragraph.
Hi Ahmed,It is great you have joined italki to improve your English. I corrected your paragraph. You did a good job. I was able to understand the meaning of your sentences. Remember to work on grammar. Each new sentence should start with a CAPITAL letter and have a period (.) at the end. Best of luck!
-Jessica
0 votedSeptember 26, 20161Spring arrived on in Brazil
My last weekend was very relaxing. I went to a party on Saturday afternoon, then on Sunday I stayed at home with my family. My little son had a bit of a cold, so we stayed home and relaxed. and then more relaxing... The season spring season has started in have start on Brazil and I very really like the current wealth. weather. Now the days´temperature increase a bit and is more fun to play and enjoy with the kids... Today's temperature is warm so it was nice to enjoy the weather and play with my kids.0 votedSeptember 26, 20161
