#IELTS#(Please correct it ,thanks!)Describe a time you made an appointment
You should say:
What it is
When you started to become interested in it
What you have learned from it
And explain why you have interest in it
Well, the science subject that I am interested in is mathematics, which is the most fundamental science subject in my mind.
Actually, I have been studying math ever since my primary school, areas like algebra, geometry, calculus and so forth. As I recall, when I was on my home from school, my father always asked me quiz questions, which raised my interests of learning math.
Personally, I do believe it is important and I love it for some reasons.
Firstly, it offers me a chance to develop intellectual potential. Whenever I come across some math problems, I would try many methods to deal with them. I might get a sense of fulfillment by solving a math problem. There is no doubt that my logical thinking can be greatly boosted.
In addition to that, considering that my major is Finance and I intend to become a financial analyst in the future, grasping the knowledge of math is undoubtedly necessary. Obviously, math is the foundation of every other subjects including Finance. When it comes to research financial problems, I need do a lot of math-related work such as building a math model and solving the equation.
What’s more, if we didn’t know basic knowledge of math, we would fall into trouble very easily in our daily life; for example, we are not able to have a financial plan or compare prices of products from different companies in order to save money.
In general, Mathematic ability is a must-have skill for me. That’s why it is worth learning.
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In general, Mathematical ability is a must-have skill for me. That’s why it is worth learning.
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#IELTS#(Please correct it ,thanks!)Describe a time you made an appointment
You should say:What it is
When you started to become interested in it
What you have learned from it
And explain why you have interest in it
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PART 1
Well, the scientific subject that I am most interested in is mathematics, which, to my mind, is the most fundamental science subject in my mind.Since you wrote "the", there can only be one, so add "most"(=最). Or, you could write "A scientific subject I'm interested in.."
Actually, I have been studying math ever since my primary school, OR: "...my primary school years"areas like algebra, geometry, calculus and so forth. As I recall, when I was on my way home from school, my father always asked me quiz questions, which raised my interests of in learning math.
Personally, I do believe it is important and I love it for some reasons. We usually use "do" when we're arguing with someone: "he doesn't believe it, but I do believe it." At other times, "do believe" 比较口语的, 如： “Well, I do believe that you're the prettiest little thing I've ever seen!”
Firstly, it offers me a chance to develop my intellectual potential. Whenever I come across some math problems, I would try many methods to deal with them. I might get a sense of fulfillment by solving a math problem. There is no doubt that my logical thinking can be greatly boosted.
In addition to that, considering that my major is Finance and I intend to become a financial analyst in the future, grasping the knowledge of math is undoubtedly necessary. Obviously, math is the foundation of every other subjects including Finance. 数学是比较文学的基础呢？ When it comes to researching financial problems, I need do a lot of math-related work such as building a math mathematical models and solving the equations.
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#IELTS#(Please correct it ,thanks!)Describe a time you made an appointment
You should say:What it is
When you started to become interested in it
What you have learned from it
And explain why you have interest in it
The subject that I am interested in is mathematics which, in my mind, is the most fundamental science subject.
Actually I have been studying math ever since my primary school - areas such as algebra, geometry, calculus, and so forth. As I recall, when I was on my way home from school, my father always asked me quiz questions, which raised my interests of in learning math.
Personally, I do believe it is important and I love it for many reasons.
Firstly, it offers me a chance to develop my intellectual potential. Whenever I come across a math problem, I will try many methods to deal with it. I might get a sense of fulfillment by solving a math problem. There is no doubt that my logical thinking can greatly boost my sense of fulfillment.
In addition to that, considering that my major is Finance and I intend to become a financial analyst in the future, grasping the knowledge of math is undoubtedly necessary. Obviously, math is the foundation of every other subjects including Finance. When it comes to researching financial problems, I need do a lot of math-related work such as building a math model and solving the equations.
What’s more, if we didn’t know basic knowledge of math, we would fall into trouble very easily in our daily life; for example, we would not be able to have a financial plan or compare prices of products from different companies in order to save money.
In general, Mathematic ability is a must-have skill for me. That’s why it is worth learning.
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Aha Describe an area of subject that you are interested in (such as physics, medicine，mathematics)
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