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LESSON FOUR - FOURTH DAY Good evening! I'm very tired, today I taught judo for seven hours; this morning I knew some children six / seven years old, they are students of elementary school from Rosta. This evening I've taught my judo's students and I've fight with them, they are twenty years old. They are very strong and I'm very old to fight again, but I'm still not so weak as to let me beat. I think I'm so tired not for fighting but for the children's screams. Good bye Massimo

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LESSON FOUR - FOURTH DAY

Good evening!


I'm very tired, today for  I had taught a judo class for seven hours;  since this morning. My students were I knew some children six /  to seven years olds ---- , they are students of elementary school pupils from Rosta.


This In the evening the I've taught my judo's students and I've fight with them, they students were are twenty years old and I had to spar with them.  They are very strong and I'm not as agile as them  very old to fight again, but I'm still not so weak as to let me not to the point that they can best me easily. beat.

I think I'm so tired not ----  for fighting from the physical activities but from  for the children's the high-pitched screams of the children.
Good bye Goodbye.  Thanks for lending an ear.  


Massimo

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LESSON FOUR - FOURTH DAY

Good evening!
I'm very tired, today I taught judo for seven hours(better:"I held judo classes for seven hours today"); this morning I knew (..."i got to know")some children six / seven years old, they are students of elementary school from Rosta.(when you are refering to "students" you are thinking of colegees(go to college),in your sentence you are probably thinking of scholars or pupils,so,"they are Rosta elementary school scholars").
This evening I've taught my judo's students and I've fight with them, they are twenty years old.("This evening i taught and faught my students,they are all twenty years old")
They are very strong and I'm very old to fight again, but I'm still not so weak as to let me beat.("They are strong and i'm very old.Even though i'm older and weaker than before i did not let them beat me")
I think I'm so tired not for fighting but for the children's screams.("It is probably the screaming that caused me so much exhaustion,not the fight itself ")
Good bye Massimo
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LESSON FOUR - FOURTH DAY

Good evening!
I'm very tired. today I taught judo for seven hours.  this morning I knewsaw/taught some children six / seven years old, theywho are students ofat an elementary school fromin Rosta.
This evening I've taught my judo's students. and I've fightfought with them, they are twenty years old.
They are very strong and I'm very old to still be fightingfight again, but I'm still not so weak as to let them beat meme beat.
I think I'm so tired not forfrom fighting, but forbecause of the children's screams.
Good bye Massimo


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