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让去散步吧 男:让去散步吧! 女:我们去哪里? 男:现在很早,所以我觉得下去外滩 女:好 男:你吃早饭了吗? 女:对,我已经吃了蛋饼 男:好,我还要吃了,所以我吃了,然后我们走吧 女:太好了!

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让我们去散步吧   此句没有主语 This sentence doesn't have a subject.

男:让我们去散步吧!  the same as above
女:我们去哪里?
男:现在很早,所以我觉得下去外滩   :下海滩去。下...去 is a fixed collocation.
女:好
男:你吃早饭了吗?
女:对,我已经吃了蛋饼
男:好,我还要吃了,所以我吃了,然后我们走吧   "了" indicates that the action has been done, "还要" shows that eating is something you want to do next which means you haven't eaten. It is contradicton.
女:太好了!
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让去散步吧

男:让我们去散步吧!(Actually "我们去散步吧" is better, we seldom use "让" in colloquial speech)
女:我们去哪里?
男:现在还很早,所以我觉得可以去外滩
女:好
男:你吃过早饭了吗?
女:对,我已经吃了蛋饼
男:好,我还没吃,等我吃完,我们就走吧
女:没问题!


Red means the origin is wrong.

Yellow means the origin sounds weird.

Green means the origin is basically correct. I revise it to make it more idiomatic.

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让去散步吧

男:让我们去散步吧!
女:我们去哪里?
男:现在很早,所以我觉得去外滩吧
女:好
男:你吃早饭了吗?
女:对,我已经吃了蛋饼
男:好,我还没吃,等我吃完,然后我们就走吧
女:太好了!
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让去散步吧

男:让去散步吧!
女:我们去哪里?
男:现在很早,所以我觉得下去外滩
女:好
男:你吃早饭了吗?
女:对,我已经吃了蛋饼
男:好,我也要吃了,等我吃完了,然后我们走吧
女:太好了!
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男:让去散步吧!

^-^ 我们去散步吧!( 让 usually leads a noun, pronoun and demonstrative pronoun in a sentence. eg: "让子弹飞\让我们在一起\让这个人开心)

女:我们去哪里?

^-^ 去哪里好呢? ( "我们去哪里" is grammatically right but sounds odd. "我们“ here is redundant, as you have already mentioned it above"我们去散步吧“. That is to say, there are only two of us, no third one.  So, "我们“ becomes unnecessary here.

男:现在很早,所以我觉得下去外滩

^-^ 现在还早,所以我觉得可以去外滩。
女:好

^-^ OK
男:你吃早饭了吗?

^-^ OK
女:对,我已经吃了蛋饼

^-^ 嗯,我吃了蛋饼。( OK, "嗯“here is optional. )

^-^ 嗯,我已经吃了。( OK, "嗯“here is optional. )

^-^ 嗯,我吃过了。( OK, "嗯“here is optional. )

( When you ask someone whether he has done something, he should answer "嗯,I have done it. “ or you can just ignore"嗯“, and use " I have done it" directly. )
男:好,我还要吃了,所以我吃了,然后我们走吧

^-^ 好,我还没吃,等我吃完,我们就走吧。
女:太好了!

^-^ 好的!( “太好了” here sounds pretty strange.)

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