San Francisco
I guess I'm lucky. I was looking for a topic to write about when I found a comment in my last entry from a person who lives in San Francisco. He told me he lives near the Golden Gate Bridge (from now on GGB), a very nice place indeed.
I've been in SF many times for business and tourism and every time I go I can't help but visit the GGB again. Every time I see the gigantic steel structure I think about the marvels man has made along history. I had seen the GGB in pictures and movies many times before my first trip to SF, but the first time I was actually there I though : "WOW. It's huge!" Then, I read the plates about how the bridge was built and my amazement rose up... I can only imagine how many problems those men had to face to build such a huge structure over the bay.
Overall SF is a nice city although a bit expensive for my pocket :-) Everything is so clean and ordered that I couldn't help but think about those 80's sitcoms where all was about happy families living the american dream. The Presidio is one of the most beautiful neighborhoods I've ever seen in my life... and the Golden Gate Park is simply a paradise within the city.
I think it's enough for now. I'll write more about SF in one of my next entries I promise. It's just that it's better to keep things concise and short. Thanks for reading!
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San Francisco
I guess I'm lucky. I was looking for a topic to write about when I found a comment in my last entry from a person who lives in San Francisco. He told me he lives near the Golden Gate Bridge (from now on GGB), a very nice place indeed.I've been in SF many times for business and tourism and every time I go I can't help but visit the GGB again. Every time I see the gigantic steel structure I think about the marvels man has made along through history. I had seen the GGB in pictures and movies many times before my first trip to SF, but the first time I was actually there I thought : "WOW. It's huge!" Then, I read the plates about how the bridge was built and my amazement rose up... I can only imagine how many problems those men had to face to build such a huge structure over the bay.
Overall SF is a nice city although a bit expensive for my pocket :-) Everything is so clean and ordered that I couldn't help but think about those 80's sitcoms where all everything was about happy families living the American dream. The Presidio is one of the most beautiful neighborhoods I've ever seen in my life... and the Golden Gate Park is simply a paradise within the city.
I think that is it's enough for now. I'll write more about SF in one of my next entries, I promise. It's just that it's better to keep things concise and short. Thanks for reading!
Your writing is always almost perfect. I am jealous.
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San Francisco
I guess I'm lucky. I was looking for a topic to write about when I found a comment in my last entry from a person who lives in San Francisco. He told me he lives near the Golden Gate Bridge (from now on GGB), a very nice place indeed.I've been in SF many times for business and tourism, and every time I go, I can't help but visit the GGB again. Every time I see the gigantic steel structure I think about the marvels man has made throughout history. I had seen the GGB in pictures and movies many times before my first trip to SF, but the first time I was actually there, I thought, "WOW! It's huge!" Then, I read the information plaques / plates about how the bridge was built and my amazement rose up. I can only imagine how many problems those men had to face to build such a huge structure over the bay.
Overall SF is a nice city although a bit expensive for my pocket. Everything is so clean and orderly that I couldn't help but think about those 80's sitcoms where each was about happy families living the American Dream. The Presidio is one of the most beautiful neighborhoods I've ever seen in my life, and Golden Gate Park is simply a paradise within the city.
I think it's enough for now. I'll write more about SF in one of my next entries I promise. It's just that it's better to keep things concise and short. Thanks for reading!
Another good job, Alvaro! Since you mentioned me in your introductory sentences, I felt compelled to correct your latest entry. Just a minor misspelling or two. Again, some of your sentences were a bit long, so I added a comma. The ellipsis marks (...) are used to indicate something has been left out (i.e. Four score and seven years ago...),so I am not sure what you are trying to convey, so I just made them periods (.) instead. Outside of those small things, your command of, and composition in, the English language is very good. I hope this helps you. J.
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