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It will be wonderful for us to know different local conditions and customs through travelling. In one hand, we can enjoy scenery which we never saw before. In the other hand, the experience of discovering different people's diverse ways of life is quite exciting. Why those local people live such a different way of life from us? The question impels us to observe how the local geography , history and traditional culture impact the conception of people there. We will certainly acquire a lot of knowledge through this learning process. Some intelligent visitors may further compare those different ways of life and absorb the essence. In other word, they can combine the suitable part of other cultures with their own life wisdom. Consequently, they will live a life full of variety.
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Travelling Please help me revise the article!Thanks a lot!
It will be wonderful for us to know different local conditions and customs through travelling. In On one hand, we can enjoy scenery which we never saw before. In On the other hand, the experience of discovering different people's diverse ways of life is quite exciting. Why do those local people live such a different way of life from us? The question impels us to observe how the local geography , history and traditional culture impact the conception concepts of people there. We will certainly acquire a lot of knowledge through this learning process. Some intelligent visitors may further compare those different ways of life and absorb the essence. In other word words, they can combine the suitable part of other cultures with their own life wisdom. Consequently, they will live a life full of variety.0
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