Travelling Please help me revise the article!Thanks a lot! It will be wonderful for us to know different local conditions and customs through travelling. In one hand, we can enjoy scenery which we never saw before. In the other hand, the experience of discovering different people's diverse ways of life is quite exciting. Why those local people live such a different way of life from us? The question impels us to observe how the local geography , history and traditional culture impact the conception of people there. We will certainly acquire a lot of knowledge through this learning process. Some intelligent visitors may further compare those different ways of life and absorb the essence. In other word, they can combine the suitable part of other cultures with their own life wisdom. Consequently, they will live a life full of variety.

Empty Nester Phenomenon Please help me revise the article! Nowadays,some elderly people attract the attention of their children by finding fault with them.Is this love or trouble?From my point of view,the behavior is out of love but usually ending with trouble.As we all know,the phenomenon called ‘Empty Nester’ is becoming increasingly fierce.Only in China emptynesters take account for about 40% of the old.Their children may be too busy with work or just not accordance with filial.They are lack of care,concern and love.They are extremely eager for their children's returning home.As a result,emptynesters sometimes make some odd,even ultra behaviors such as picking a hole in their children,which aims to draw their attention.However,these behaviors often get their children into trouble.To make things worse,the children will think it's annoying and hate their parents.

What's the meaning of this sentence? A boy has been hungry for many days and he finally found some biscuits.He said 'Christmas,birthday and Diwali came all at the same time!'What's the meaning of this sentence?

A story Today I was shocked by a girl's story.The girl is a native of Shanghai,an international metroplis,which indicates that she has a good living condition.However,her boyfriend isn't very rich and can provide no house.The girl thought he cannot creat a comfortable life for her so that she always hesitated to marry him.Things became even worse when the girl went to her boyfriend's home in Jiangxi and had a simple,terrible meal.She broke up with the poor boy immediately!

Love and Money Today I was shocked by a girl's story.The girl is a native of Shanghai,an international metroplis,which indicates that she has a good living condition.However,her boyfriend isn't very rich and can provide no house.The girl thought he cannot creat a comfortable life for her so that she always hesitated to marry him.Things became even worse when the girl went to her boyfriend's home in Jiangxi and had a simple,terrible meal.She broke up with the poor boy immediately! I am lost in thought after hearing about the story.It's a realistic phenomenon in China that many women tend to marry someone affluent.As a result,they have sufficient money to use,spend more time enjoying themselves and what's more,suffer less pressure.I must admit that if a woman marry someone rich,she'll have all these vantages.However,'Love' isn't equal to 'Money'. What do we actually talk about when we talk about love?Love is invisible but magical.We cannot tell when we 'Love' someone exactly.We cannot tell which part of him that we love most.We even cannot tell why we love that person so much.Nevertheless,love lets two people who may never see each other before get together ,walk down the aisle and take care of each other through their whole life.'Love' means someone is very important to you.'Love' means loyalty,tolerance and trust.Our women can live by our own hands instead of relying on man.'Love' has nothing to do with 'Money'. I hope that all of our women can find our 'Love' and cherish it,whether that person is rich or poor.

Please help me to revise this composition!Thanks a lot! Today I was shocked by a girl's story.The girl is a native of Shanghai,an international metroplis,which indicates that she has a good living condition.However,her boyfriend isn't very rich and can provide no house.The girl thought he cannot creat a comfortable life for her so that she always hesitated to marry him.Things became even worse when the girl went to her boyfriend's home in Jiangxi and had a simple,terrible meal.She broke up with the poor boy immediately! I am lost in thought after hearing about the story.It's a realistic phenomenon in China that many women tend to marry someone affluent.As a result,they have sufficient money to use,spend more time enjoying themselves and what's more,suffer less pressure.I must admit that if a woman marry someone rich,she'll have all these vantages.However,'Love' isn't equal to 'Money'. What do we actually talk about when we talk about love?Love is invisible but magical.We cannot tell when we 'Love' someone exactly.We cannot tell which part of him that we love most.We even cannot tell why we love that person so much.Nevertheless,love lets two people who may never see each other before get together ,walk down the aisle and take care of each other through their whole life.'Love' means someone is very important to you.'Love' means loyalty,tolerance and trust.Our women can live by our own hands instead of relying on man.'Love' has nothing to do with 'Money'. I hope that all of our women can find our 'Love' and cherish it,whether that person is rich or poor.