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Empty Nester Phenomenon Please help me revise the article! Nowadays,some elderly people attract the attention of their children by finding fault with them.Is this love or trouble?From my point of view,the behavior is out of love but usually ending with trouble.As we all know,the phenomenon called ‘Empty Nester’ is becoming increasingly fierce.Only in China emptynesters take account for about 40% of the old.Their children may be too busy with work or just not accordance with filial.They are lack of care,concern and love.They are extremely eager for their children's returning home.As a result,emptynesters sometimes make some odd,even ultra behaviors such as picking a hole in their children,which aims to draw their attention.However,these behaviors often get their children into trouble.To make things worse,the children will think it's annoying and hate their parents.

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Nowadays, some elderly people try to attract the attention of their children by finding fault with them. Is this an expression of love or trouble? From my point of view, the behavior is out of love but it usually ending ends with trouble. As we all know, the phenomenon called ‘Empty Nester’ phenomenon is becoming increasingly fierce. Only in China do empty-nesters take account for about 40% of the old nation's elderly population. Their children may be too busy with work or just not accordance with filial worried about their parents well-being. They are lack of care, concern and love. They Elderly parents are extremely eager for their children's returning to return home. As a result, empty-nesters sometimes make display some odd, even ultra extreme behaviors, such as picking a hole in a fight with their children, which aims with an aim to draw their attention. However, these such behavior often gets their children into trouble. To make things worse, the children will think it's annoying and hate their parents.

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