Letter to my love (2)
Dear future husband,
My uncle passed away last week, I went back to hometown for the funeral. I feel very sorry for my cousin, she lost her mother few years ago, now she lost her father, she is not married, totally alone now. I am very worry about her, so I invited her to move to my city to live with me, I told her my salary may not much, but enough for both of us living, so I can take care of her, if she can't quit the job, even come for a holiday is good. But she doesn't like the city I live, so she is not coming, but later she said we can travel to Thailand together after June.
My dear, after this funeral, I feel life is so fragile sometimes, you never know what gonna happen next. We should take care of our loves, and spend time with them as much as we can. My dear, I really wish we can meet soon, and be together. Also I am so scared of my parents getting old and the final day come, I wish that time you are with me, hug me, give me courage.
My love, wherever you are at right now, take good care of yourself for me, and find me soon.
Love you xoxoxo
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Letter to my love (2)
Dear future husband,My uncle passed away last week, so I went back to my hometown for the funeral. I feel very sorry for my cousin, she lost her mother a few years ago and now she has lost her father, too. She is not married, so she is totally alone now. I am very worry worried about her, so I invited her to move to my city to live with me. I told her my salary may is not much, but enough for both of us living to live off of. I can take care of her. If she can't quit the her job, maybe she can at least even come for a holiday is good. But However, she doesn't like the city I live in, so she is not coming, but later she said we can travel to Thailand together after June.
My dear, after this funeral, I feel life is so fragile sometimes, you never know what is going to gonna happen next. We should take care of our loves loved ones and spend time with them as much as we can. My dear, I really wish we can could meet soon and be together. I am also very scared of my parents getting old and when the final day comes, I wish hope that time you are with me, to hug me and give me courage.
My love, wherever you are at right now, take good care of yourself for me and find me soon.
Love you xoxoxo
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