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Medical Tests On Animals I read an article of medical tests on animals yesterday. I always feel that these tests are very cruel until I read the article. There two main advantages from it. The article said medical tests on animals improve modern medical science. Medical research cannot test in human bodies without any protection, so animals become the best choice as a succedaneum. Every medicine must be tested before product. The only best way is testing on animals. It helps a lot to improve modern medical science. Another opinion the article said about clones. Many counties ban clones, but the article thinks clones is good for medical science. If somebody has heart disease, doctors could clone a new heart. Maybe heart disease will be conquered by the way. Two reasons from it seem like reasonable, do you agree?

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Medical Tests On Animals

I read an article about medical tests on animals yesterday. I always feel that these tests are very cruel until I read the article. There are two main advantages from it.
The article said medical tests on animals improve modern, medical science. Medical research cannot be tested on human bodies without any protection, so animals become the best choice as a succedaneum. All ("all" just sounds more natural here) medicine must be tested before being produced (or, "before production is done"). The only best way is to test on animals. It helps a lot to improve modern medical science.
Another opinion the article said is about cloning. Many countries ban cloning, but the article thinks cloning is good for medical science. If somebody has heart disease, doctors could clone a new heart. Maybe heart disease will be conquered by this method (or you can say, "... in this way").
These two reasons from it seem likely reasonable, do you agree?

Good writing Lily Lan. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections, and also keep notes of them. These are ways to make your English more natural. One example is "cloning", which is how we talk about this topic. When we talk about making clones, we say "cloning". - Jason

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