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An Attractive Woman
When her she appeared in front of you, envy must appear have filled in your mind to see such a beauty around me. Not only can she drive a car, she is clever and speaks fluent English - why have such excellent woman around me, she can drive the car and speaks fluent english, and also very beautiful and clever,and so on , I think it‘s seem like a goddess in all men’s hearts, the sentence is right There is truth in this:woman must increase the knowledge though learning, even though one day you older but you also very attractive .i think she is that people.1
1. I cannot decipher this sentence. Write in Chinese for a correction.
These are ordinary qualities over here in the US and not all men would envy such things. I don't. These are exterior qualities. Whether she is capable or not that is another question. Here's a new term for you. "Never be a trophy wife of anyone"
A attractive women
When her appear in front of you, envy must appear in your mind,why have such excellent woman around me, she can drive the car and speaks fluent english, and also very beautiful and clever,and so on , I think it‘s seem like a goddess in all men’s heart, the sentence is right:woman must increase the knowledge though learning, even though one day you older but you also very attractive .i think she is that people.我英语也不好,我觉得你这篇文章语感很硬,虽然我不知如何下手改语法,但里面语法问题也挺多的,建议你多听多看地道的语言
A attractive women
When she appears in front of you, envy must appear in your mind,why have such an excellent woman around me, she can drive the car and she speaks fluent english; and also is very beautiful and clever,and so on , I think it seems like a goddess in all men’s hearts, the sentence is right:women must increase the knowledge though learning, even though one day you're older but you are also very attractive .i think she is that person.
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