A attractive women

When her appear in front of you, envy must appear in your mind，why have such excellent woman around me, she can drive the car and speaks fluent english, and also very beautiful and clever,and so on , I think it‘s seem like a goddess in all men’s heart, the sentence is right：woman must increase the knowledge though learning, even though one day you older but you also very attractive .i think she is that people.我英语也不好，我觉得你这篇文章语感很硬，虽然我不知如何下手改语法，但里面语法问题也挺多的，建议你多听多看地道的语言